Hm... ami kobita r boddha na. Tobe ami art and culture er ekta rule e bisshash kori , ja amar kache valo lage sheitai valo. Critic value ke ami boro kore dekhi na.
shei aspect e bolte pari, ke ki bolbe jani na, kintu kobita ta amar oshadharon laglo.
kobita ta prothom poray thik bujhini , kintu 2-3 bar porar por onek beshi vivid laglo kobita ta.oi line guli r inner feelings oshadharon , oi mangsho pinder aboronhinota kingba rod chosma r kotha ...
tobe ami first e kobita pore jeita vabsilam , sheita hocche , aita kono kumari ma ba dehopojibi r nijer onagoto shontan ke uddessho kore lekha. pore obossho reply pore vul bujhte parsi.
nice work. Hope to see more poems from you. |