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Old 08-04-2007, 08:32 AM
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Circle of Life

It's the circle of life…..

And it moves us all…..

Through despair and hope…..

Through faith and love…..

Till we find our place…..

On the path unwinding…..

In the circle

The circle of life…..






Female Characters:

Simmi Khan: A tomboy personality…but really friendly and sweet. She doesn’t spend time on her dressing and fashion...totally like a boy… always keeps her hair tied but there is a little girly mind inside her. She has a huge crush on the heart throb in her school…but she doesn’t tell or express it to anyone, ‘cause she is scared to lose her cool from her guy friends…since she is not like all the other girls in her school.

Nijhum Mirza: A person who only cares about study and nothing else. She is smart and very helpful. Everyone in her class always gets help from her…even people from other classes come to her for help. She never says no to them…but she is very straight forward and doesn’t like to be bothered when she is busy.

Shareen Mahmood: Very stylish…new to town and to the school also. She is incredibly beautiful…and very sweet…but extremely rude to boys who try to flirt and show off. She is kind of excited plus afraid of her new school.


Male Characters:

Shahariar Ahmed: Heart throb in the school. He is extremely good looking and 6’2” tall…a brilliant student and best at sports…everyone loves him…teachers, friends, girls, and especially Simmi…but no one knows about it.

Ayan Azad: A big flirt…6 feet tall and always spikes his hair to be hotter…very careful of his fashion…talented singer and a fast bowler in cricket…but never does any of those, ‘cause he is too busy flirting with girls. : P

Abeer Alam: A mysterious person…6’3” tall with hazel eyes…doesn’t talk unnecessarily. He only talks when he thinks he needs to talk…he only plays guitar when he is alone…..he tries people not to notice him.


Settings: Okay!...They all live in a small town in Chittagong…which is named as the most clean and crime free town in the city….everyone knows everyone there…and they are like a family all together. The colony is only for the officers in Chittagong…..they go to their nearest school Morrison High….which is a bully free school and very popular and really good at studying and sports…The kids go to school mostly by walking….sometimes they take bikes…all together its like a dreamland….





Part -1
First Day of School

When Shareen first entered the school campus... She was amazed…she couldn’t believe her how beautiful the school was…(description: the school has 3 floors, 1st,2nd and 3rd … it has four exits….north, south, east and west…on the southern side of the school it has a huge field, which is suitable for any sport….the main entrance is the east door)….she came into her sense again when someone tapped on her shoulder from behind…she turns and sees this tall spiked hair guy.
Ayan: “Hey! I’m Ayan”
Shareen: “Hi! I’m Shareen”
Ayan: “ Hmm.. I think you’re new to this school and town, cause I never saw you here before”
Shareen: “Yeah, I am new, don’t really know much people here.”
She starts walking towards the hallway….Ayan follows her…
Ayan: “ Oh!..Who is your homeroom teacher ?”
Shareen: “ Mr. Khilji”
Ayan: “Really? He is my homeroom teacher too…sweet man”
Someone calls out Ayan’s name…he turns to see who it is…then smiles and waves at them and tells them that he is coming..
Ayan: “Ok! Shareen I gotta go now…see you in class”
Shareen: “Bye”


As Simmi sees Ayan coming she exclaims…
Simmi: “Were flirting with the new girl?”
Ayan: “Flirting? What do you mean? I was just being nice you know…”

Simmi: “Yeah, Yeah, I forgot that you don’t flirt”
Then she was about to poke Ayan but he got away…
Simmi: “Damn you”
Ayan starts teasing her and Simmi starts kicking him…
Abir: “Guys! Stop! We are getting late for the class…”
Ayan: “Abir you made a mistake….We are not guys.. I am the only guy and Simmi is a girl…so you are supposed to say Guy and girl stop!”
Simmi: “Hey! I am not a girl”…
Ayan: Whatever Simmi…We all know what you are”
Simmi: “Oh! At least I am not a flirt like you”
Abir: “Both of you…just be quiet and lets go to class now”

Shareen was walking down the hallway and looking for her class…she noticed that a lot of eyes were on her…she smiled at her self….its nothing new….
She smiled again when she saw 11C on the 2nd last room southern room in 3rd floor..
She was about to go in but someone calls her from behind..
Ayan: “Shareen…hey what’s up? Found you’re class?”
Shareen: “Well yeah….You can see we are standing in front of it…”
Then she goes in…and looks around the class….saw an empty sit beside a smart pretty girl, who is reading a book with all her heart….she looks nice….Shareen goes and asks her if she can sit here...the girl puts her head up, sees Shareen and smiles..
Nijhum: “of course you can” then she started reading again..
Shareen sits beside her and looks around..

Simmi sits beside Ayan and started giggling..
Simmi: “Loser…you couldn’t sit with her…hahahah..”
Ayan: “Well you are a loser too.”
Simmi: “No! I am not”
Ayan: “of course you are…then why are you sitting beside me? Loser seeks losers”
He bursts out laughing…and Simmi takes her bag and goes to sit with Abir..

Abir puts his head up to see who is in front of him..he sees two girls….Nijhum he can recognize from grade 8 and the other one he doesn’t know…he thought she might be the new one....then he puts his head down and starts dreaming..
Simmi:” Abir! I am sitting beside you.. I don’t wanna sit beside that loser”
Abir: “Ok! But you can’t talk…I am busy”
Ayan heard it and start laughing at Simmi…Simmi knows she shouldn’t bother Abir now…She looks at Ayan and gives him a look that meant “ watch in the lunch”..

As Mr. Khilji enters the class….everyone stands up and he tells them to sit down…and then he looks at Simmi and tells her to bring the attendance from the office….Simmi goes to get the attendance…

As she was walking down the hallway alone…she was dreaming about her dream guy…then she bumped into someone….she looked up….it was him….Shahariar Ahmed….Simmi was frozen…Shahariar smiled at her and said sorry and started walking again….Simmi felt shy….cause of her dressing….hair tied up….no makeup….she knows he will never like her…but she doesn’t stop loving him…..




To be continued



P.S. Since its my first tiem writing ..obviously its not that good..and please forgive me for my mistakes...it would be very nice if u guys take ur time to read it and leave a comment...thank u..


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Last edited by Samia; 08-05-2007 at 12:18 AM. Reason: updated part--2
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Old 08-04-2007, 08:42 AM
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nice api!! keep writing, it'll be good...i like romantic people


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Old 08-04-2007, 08:46 AM
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awww...thank u soo much.. i am gonna write part 2 tomorrow..


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Old 08-04-2007, 08:48 AM
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nice poem, u wrote it?

Interesting story


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Old 08-04-2007, 09:28 AM
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lol its not a peom..its song by elton john..circle of life..


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lol its not a peom..its song by elton john..circle of life..
Elton john shuni na


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Old 08-05-2007, 12:08 AM
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Part – 2
At lunch and After school


As Simmi, Abir and Ayan also sat together in the cafeteria and started talking about their normal topics……when Simmi saw Shareen coming toward their table, she hit Ayan with her elbow and told him to see who is coming…..he looked up and froze…only Abir was with no reaction…he was eating his lunch…
Ayan: “Hey Shareen!”
Shareen: “Hey Ayan and I think you are Simmi and he is…”
Abir: “Abir”
Abir looked at her as he said his name…she was looking at him….at his beautiful hazel eyes…Abir felt something…something he never felt before…he quickly removed his eyes from Shareen…
Shareen: “You have beautiful eyes!”
Abir: “ Thank you!” then he felt strange….very strange but it was nice to feel it.. he thought….
Simmi: “So Shareen…where do you live? Do you come to school by yourself? Do you live near? “
Ayan: “Don’t mind about her Shareen, Simmi just talks way too much.”
Simmi: “Oh..just be quiet Ayan…So ya Shareen..?”
Shareen: “I live near….5 blocks after this..and my dad dropped me today...”
Simmi: “Oh Sweet!We all live near each others…..you could come to school with us.. Would you like to?”
Shareen: “That would be very nice…..Thank you Simmi”
Simmi: “No Problem hehe…”
Simmi was laughing with her friends al four of them but suddenly she stopped when she saw Shahriar passing by…she tried to act normal….No one noticed but Abir did, though he didn’t say anything....

As the bell rang….all the kids went back to their class..
Shareen sat again where she sat before. This time Nijhum wasn’t reading a book and she noticed Shareen..
Nijhum: “Hey! I am sorry I couldn’t talk to you in the morning. I was ..err kinda busy reading this book.” She shows Shareen the book..
Shareen: “Its ok…and the book you are reading I already read it before…”
Nijhum: “Really? You read books?...well I read it too but I am reading it again since its my favourite one..” She smiles and winks at her…
Shareen: “Yeah..I do...but not that much…only a few…”
Nijhum smiles at her….and Shareen was about to say something but she stopped when she saw the teacher coming in….everyone stood up as the teacher came….and when the history teacher started lecturing about the World War I....everyone was listening except Ayan…he was busy giggling at Simmi because she dropped water on skirt at lunch….and Ayan couldn’t stopped laughing at her skirt.....Teacher noticed Ayan and tells him “If you don’t want to listen to my lecture you could go outside and don’t come to my class anymore.” As Ayan was going out of the class with hi head down the teacher says again “since it’s your first time. You can come to my class next time but behave yourself….and now go I will tell you when to come in..”….Simmi put hr both hand to block her mouth from laughing but she couldn’t control her self…” Simmi..do you want to go outside too?” said the teacher… “ No. Sir”..said Simmi…

As the teacher continues….Nijhum was listening to him and taking notes but she stopped and looked up to see Ayan outside…She doesn’t know why it felt so strange when she saw him getting out of the class…She looks at him....and thinks the biggest flirt in grade 11 and always get rejected from girls..…She feels bad for him…then goes back to her work again…


After School..when all four of them were walking home Simmi was teasing Ayan about the kicked out thingy…and Abir and Shareen were laughing at Simmi’s jokes..
Ayan was frowning at Simmi…but who listens…Shareen turns to see her around then she sees Nijhum going home by herself…She calls her…
Shareen: “Nijhum!”
Nijhum turns back to see who called her and saw Shareen....she waved at her....
Shareen: “would you like to walk with us?”
Simmi: “That would be fun….Nijhum come with us”
Nijhum: “Sure”

As Nijhum joined them….they all go home laughing except Ayan frowning at Simmi’s jokes…


to be continued


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Old 08-05-2007, 12:09 AM
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To prantik.. i am sorry if i din't write it good.. i willl try to write it better next time..and for ur critcizing..


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