Circle of Life-- part 1,2,3,4,5,6

[Severus]

they look like real characters ...
nicely written apu

[Samia]

thanks bhaiya..:0

[_MuHaI_]

SAAAAAAAAM.... joss lekhsos dost.. =D

Ayan er bowling action ta joldi post korish! =$
m waiting fer that one... lol

[Samia]

aww..thank you muhai..and ya i will post it..soon..lol..

[guitarNstrings]

yo serious kahini dekhi .. joss joss

[Samia]

ty ty

[Samia]

Part-3
At home

“How was your first day of school Shareen?” asked Shareen’s mom when Shareen came home… “Fine, I met some new friends….they are very nice and interesting…and I am gonna go to school with them from tomorrow..dad doesn’t need to drop me to school”…..said Shareen with a sweet smile… “Oh, I am glad that you’ve made nice friends..and that’s good..you can go to school with them. Are you gonna walk?” her mom asked… “Yeah..mostly we will walk but sometimes they take bike but I don’t have a bike plus don’t know how to ride it and I don’t want to ruin my uniform, you know how careful I am for my appearance..” said Shareen with a baby voice… “Ok, Honey you’re tired now go take some rest”…Shareen goes to her room and started doing her homework….but suddenly she remembers Abir’s beautiful hazel eyes….how beautiful they are and how deep....deep like ocean…feels so familiar, though I know those eyes for only one day…why does it feel this way…Shareen can’t figured it out…she tries to concentrate on her homework again…

Simmi is very happy today….she met two awesome friends like Nijhum and Shareen….they are very sweet…just like Shahariar...Then she blushes...Shahriar, a grade 12 student, all-rounder….better at both, study and sports… Morrison High always win against G.A. High in cricket cause of him and his cricket team…he also goes to debates…all together he is the star of Morrison High…and I love this Shahariar…who doesn’t even give a second glance to me….well I don’t really care.. I am happy with my family friends and life….she tries to convince her self but without knowing her tears starts dropping from her eyes…as soon as she heard the door knocking, she wiped her eyes and got up to open the door with a smile, she is back to her normal life again…. “Simmi…there is a new girl in your school named Shareen…and she goes to grade 11 too….Did you hear of her?” Asks her mom...
“Yes, mommy I met her she is in my class and very sweet and fashionable….but how do you know about her? She just came to this town…” Simmi asked her mom with surprises… “She is my best friend Samantha’s daughter…and they are coming tonight to our house for dinner. You clean your room and I would be very happy if you would wear something that girls wear today...” Simmi’s mom smiles and kissed Simmi on her forehead and leaves, Simmi was about to say something but stopped cause she didn’t want to get her mom sad…then she cleaned her room and tries to find something from her closet to wear….



Abir is playing his guitar in his room alone…he is trying his best to concentrate on his guitar and only one thing is bothering him a lot...Shareen… She put a spell on me I guess or why does it feel so weird when I think of her… I’ve never thought of any girl like this neither I looked at someone like the way I did to her today. This feeling is so different...it feels wired when I think of her but the feeling is nice…something goes on when I think about her……..then Abir again started playing guitar

Ayan’s face was so red with anger when he came home…. “What’s wrong kiddo? Why you look so angry?” asked Mr.Azad... “Nothing, nothing...” said Ayan and ran to his room…He didn’t want to tell his the reason of him getting angry…He loved his dad a lot… His mother passed away when Ayan was just 5…Ayan’s dad was the one who took care of him and gave him love…now Ayan didn’t want to tell his dad that he got kicked out of the class of the first day of school…


Simmi was frowning inside but couldn’t say anything...cause didn’t want to hurt her mom…she was wearing this white silk salwar kamiz with red scarf and watching a show in her drawing room and also waiting for Shareen’s family to come…She runs to the door as soon as she heard the calling bell…then she remembers she has to be a girl for tonight not a boy….so she reduced her running speed a bit. then she opened the door and saw Mahmood Family….She told them to sit in the drawing room and goes inside to call her mom and dad….then she came back again and takes Shareen to her room…in Simmi’s room: “ Wow” beautiful room and you’re looking soo pretty” said Shareen with admiring eyes.. Simmi laughs and says “well my mom made me clean my room and made me wear this uncomfortable cloth before you were coming...”…Shareen laughs too...” You don’t like wearing girls clothes..Do you?” She asked Simmi…”hell no! They are soo uncomfortable…you can’t really do stuff with them...” Simmi complained…. “Well I don’t think you’re right... You look good on them and they don’t bug you... What kind of stuff you do that these cloth bugs you a lot...”….she chuckled as she asked…. “I do a lot of stuffs…ride bike...climb the tree…go on the roof. Play basketball and many more….and also I hate keeping the scarf with me all the time. Its just soo uncomfortable...” Simmi complained again… “You really do a lot of stuff, but they are all boyish stuff….and it’s true the scarf is annoying but it’s the fashion you know...” Shareen smiled…Simmi goes “Fashion...hmm…Fashion….you’re very fashionable and pretty you know..” she told Shareen...Shareen smiles and thanked her….then the girls go to the dining room as they were called for dinner…


Today is a strange day for Nijhum……she can’t understand….though she knew she is having a strange feeling for Ayan….that feeling is very eccentric….its something she never felt before…she thinks as she was lying down on her bed trying to sleep…its not like that its my first time to see Ayan or to talk to Ayan…I know him from grade 6…and slapped him once for being stupid…we didn’t talk much….actually I didn’t.. I was too busy with my studies…but today…out of nowhere…I am wasting my time on thinking of Flirty Ayan….no. not flirty. Though is a flirt....he is a softhearted person…he is very sweet…Nijhum smiles at her self and blush…then she thinks again…no... I hope it’s not what I am thinking….Its not the right time yet….and also I don’t know Ayan personally…but again she remembers his baby red face…when he was getting kicked out of the history class today…and smiled and fell asleep….



to be continued...
P.S... i know this sucks.. i am noobiiee writer...its my first time...so forgive me..and plz comment

[angelmorn]

you seem anything but a newbie.

your writing is quite good. am eagerly waiting for the next part. this seems fun

[Samia]

thnx for the comment..

[Samia]

Part 4
A week later

Simmi was waiting at her front yard for Ayan…so then they will go and pick Abir, Nijhum and Shareen …She is very happy today cause she saw Shahariar in her dreams…she blushed when she remembered it again and also her parents are not gone be home tonight….so she can have her friends at her place for the evening.. “Simmi Mimmi!!” Ayan yelled it out…Simmi looked up and got up to go with him… “Hey Ayan” Smiled Simmi...She wanted to tell Ayan about coming over but again she wanted to tell all of them together. So she kept quiet…as they started to walk toward Abir’s house…They saw Abir with red eyes… “Dude, you look like you’re drunk….What’s wrong??” asked Ayan as he gave high five Abir… “No it’s nothing like that…I just couldn’t sleep last night…” said Abir with a tired voice… “lets go then…” Abir said and started walking with them… then picked up Nijhum and Shareen from their house… Abir’s heart stopped beating when he saw Shareen, Same thing happened to Shareen so as Nijhum when she saw Ayan…but all of them kept their secret strange feelings to them… “Guys I gotta tell u something…my parents are not gonna be home tonight. So they told me you guys can come over to my place…all of you….please don’t say no. and Abir you gotta play you guitar tonight…” Simmi finished her sentences with taking breathe…then asked again... “So you guys coming right?” …. “err…well I won’t have any problem since my parents know your parents and also I would love to come cause it’s a Friday night…nothing to do at home..” Said Shareen… “Oh Great... I know Abir and Ayan are coming for sure...” said Simmi by looking at the boys and the she looks at Nijhum… “Can you make it??” “Umm I will try. It would be better if you could call my home and talk to my mom about it...” Nijhum said with a confused voice... “Oh Sure I will have my mom talk to your mom” Simmi smiled….. “Guys we are getting late for school...walk fast” yelled Ayan…

“Simmi are your friends coming over?” Asked Simmi’s mom… “Yes mom…and can you call Nijhum’s parents and tell them to send Nijhum here for tonight….” Simmi told her mom... “Oh, sure...” her mom smiled at her. “Thank you mom” Simmi hugged her and go back to her room to clean… a few minutes later... “Mom did you call the Mirza family and told them about Nijhum coming over??” Simmi yelled out from her room… “Oh yes…Nijhum is coming in about 1 hour” her mom confirmed her… “When are you 2 leaving?” Simmi yelled again… “Soon, I am waiting for your dad to come. Then we will leave and we are gonna come home at 11:00…can you stay that long honey? I kept Pizza for you and your friends in the kitchen… Oh Simmi I am leaving your dad came…” She said as she is getting up... “Wait I am coming” Simmi came up running and hugged her mom and dad and told them to have fun at the party…and they told her to take care…now Simmi is home alone waiting for her friends to come…she is sitting on the front yard waiting and leaning against the wall…then suddenly she saw Shahariar walking by…she froze and stared at Shahariar like she had never seen him before... Then Shahariar looked at her and smiled then disappeared…Simmi felt embarrassed cause of her stupid childish reaction…Then she sees Nijhum and Shareen coming together… “Hey girls…What’s up? And thanks for coming; Yo I was so bored to death. And Nijhum did you bring the movies?” She said then looked her Nijhum’s handbag and smiled... “Yes…you brought them babe...” as she exclaimed she hugged Nijhum then Shareen…Then Abir comes with his guitar…then they go inside and Abir started to fixing his guitar and stuff as the girls started to choose a movie to watch…and then finally Ayan came late… and at that time they were having a vote on which kind of movie they should watch…Scary or Fantasy…Simmi and Nijhum are on Scary side Shareen hates scary movies so she is on Fantasy side and it doesn’t matter to Abir so he said who ever will win he will be at their side...so when Ayan came they asked him to choose one type and Ayan chose Scary so then they decided to watch Final Destination 3, but before that they made Abir play the guitar and then ate some pizzas…at 8:00 pm night they started watching Final Destination 3 and Simmi went to get some pop corns…Shareen was having hard time watching the scary movie so she got mad at them and then she told them either she will leave or they stop the movie… even Nijhum got scared too...except Simmi, Ayan and Abir didn’t get scared…so they stopped the movie for Nijhum and Shareen.. and then they ate the left over pizza and talked for a long time…Ayan got Simmi mad and then they fought…everyone laughed…Abir was glancing at Shareen but without noticing other people, so as Shareen and then finally their eyes met but just then both of them moved their eyes to other side…at last when Simmi’s parents came… they had to go so the boys went to drop the girls and Simmi went with them too, Ayan took Nijhum’s handbag to hit Abir…then they dropped the Shareen and Nijhum and then Abir left to his house which is one house next to Nijhum’s house and 3 houses before Simmi’s house.. Then Simmi went to her house saying good night to Ayan… when Ayan entered his house he realized that he forgot to give Nijhum her handbag…he wanted to run back then he thought he can give her that next time he sees her…so he took the handbag in his room and looked to see rest of the movies she brought for tonight… he looked inside and took a movie then looked again inside the bag…he found a diary…Nijhum’s diary…he took the diary in his hand and started to flip over the pages…..


to be continued....

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