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Old 05-30-2007, 10:23 AM
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etar majhe kobitar gramar khoja orthohin
just ekta chonno chhara lekha


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onek..onekdin por abar hatchi ai poth die...
othocho ak somoy prae protidin hattam..
ami abong amra..
shit,grishso,boshonto aivabei par hoe jeto.
amra dektam mora,susko pata gulor jhore pora.
ar hattam amra
ai poth kakhono sesh hato na
mone hato samayer matoi oshim ai poth.
amra hatte hatte klanto hoye portam.
bose portam pother pashei footpath e.
mete uthtam orthohin sob alochonay.
vebesilam ai vabei kete jabe jibon.sarati jibon ...
emoni ek dine take dekhe chilam.
odvut ek dristi chilo tar chokhe,
jeno purono kisu khuje pacche na ja thakar kaoha..
hotat eshe dariyesilo amader samne
ar klanto du chokh melejiggesh karechilo
accha eta ki samvav?
ei eki jaegae pore thaka sharati jibon..
klanti lage na ei ak pothe katiye dite..
"obossoi shomvab"amar heshe uthe bolesilam..
lokta bivranto chokhe kisukkhon takiye hotat chole gelo.
amra abaro heshe uthechilma burotar oshomvob kotha sune.
ei poth jekhane amra khuje pai hajaro boichitro,
ja somoyer motoi oshiim..
sei poth klanto korbe amader?
amra bolesilam "ki boka lokta,na?

aaj abar hatchi onek din por.
sab kichu mone hoy ager motoi ase.
abar sab kichu jeno ager moto nei o.
buro gach gulo aro buro hoye gese.
purono susko pata gulo marie hatchi.
kintu poth ta jeno onek choto hoye gese..
vabte obak lage aksamay ai poth hattei klanto hoye giesilam amar
char pashe cheye mone holo samay jeno akhane thomke gese
sudhu purono amader mukh gulo bodle notun eshe gese
sekhane sei purono amader chokh khela korse...
ami bivranto holam..
accha ora ki sotti mone kore evebei katiye deoa shomvab jibonta.
akta poth ajibon hetei...
ora ki bojhe na klano ora aksamay hobei..
bodle jabe tara..
ora bujhe na..bujte pare na.
"ki boka ora,na?"

still waiting....
waiting for God
to know if HE is there
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Old 05-30-2007, 10:29 AM
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Kobe likhso eita...? dekhao nai keno age...?


bhalo hoise lekha ta...chonno chara lekhai bhalo...shob shomoy lekha'r rules maintain korte hobe amon kono kotha nai...aro likho....
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Old 06-02-2007, 08:33 PM
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nice sharing..
keep it up

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Old 06-03-2007, 05:06 PM
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NICE POEM..........KOBE LIOKHCEN ? WE WANT MORE ND MORE.......


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Old 08-12-2007, 12:47 AM
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hmm oneeeeeeeek boro poemmonek dhoirjo niye porlam..yeh bhalo legeche


You see the smile that's on my mouth..Its hiding the words that dont come out
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Old 08-12-2007, 01:33 AM
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josh Ranju......

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Old 08-12-2007, 01:38 AM
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nice try ..... tnkx for sharing ... keep it up bro !!!

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