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Old 02-28-2007, 07:21 PM
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Ami 1jon lajuk kobi..
amar kobita sudhu jara amake chine na tara porte pare....
Here is my one.....
Dhulo dhaka ai sohore
Mutho mutho bastotar vire
Aka aka aito pothchola
Anmone sudhu kothabola.

Brishti name ojhore jokhon
Meghguloke mone hoi apon
Kosto joto chilo govire...
Fota hoye jhore hajare.

Cigarete akti dirgho tan
Purono prio kono gan
Vasie nai je sudure
Asbona thik akdin r fire.

Cheye dekhi oi chadtake
Boddho gumot janalar fake
Nissonggo vese chole se
Kosto bilai rater akase.

Niharika poth amai dekhai
Kostera khuje fire jai
Harie gesi je ami
Hotashar ai neel ombore.


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Old 03-02-2007, 06:44 PM
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th good thing is...its simple and easy.
th bad thing is...it seriously lacks depth.


ekta gopon kotha chilo bolbar bondhu shomoy hobe ki tomar?
ekbaar shune bhule jeyo barbar bhuleo kauke bolo na abar!
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Nice poem
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Old 03-02-2007, 09:48 PM
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My new one..
SOMOY KOTHA RAKHENI
Je pare
Se hoyto kisu kisu pare
Je hare
Se hoyto kokhono kokhono hare
Sokolei ki sobkisu pare?
Sokolei ki sobsomoi-e hare?

Tumi bolle,
Akash chute paro?
Bollam
Pari, kintu chubo na.
Ami bollam
Amake valobashte paro?
Tumi bolle-
Pari, kintu bashbo na.

Ami akashta chute chaini
Karon
Ota tahole akash thakbe na.
Tumi valobashte chawni
Karon
Tate valobashar madhurjo thakbe na.

Ami akhon akashta chuye asi
Kintu
Payer niche mati nei.
Tumi akhon amke valobasho
Kintu
Tomar kase ami nei.

Dujone dujon k cheyesi
Kintu
Somoy ta chaini.
Dujone dujonar kotha rekhesi
Kintu
Somoy kotha rakheni.
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Old 03-28-2007, 09:30 PM
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Karo Valo lageni??????


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nah vai valo lagse asholei
nice sharing
aro likhte thaken..thambenna....


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eita bangla boi er kobita hoye gelo to

Nice poem also
Keep it up



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Bangla boi er kobita means............ektu bujhie bolben?


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