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Old 04-25-2006, 06:05 AM
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Default heres a lil something i wrote: check it out! sure is trash..


I do not want to clean my room
I cannot close the door;
There's so much junk piled here and there
I cannot see the floor.
I do not want to cut the grass
It's almost one foot high;
And the weeds are so abundant
I just don't want them to die.
I do not want to get the mail
I haven't in many a day;
The box is probably full of junk
And many bills to pay.
I do not want to rake the lawn
I haven't since last fall;
There are plenty of leaves left over
Hidden in the grass so tall.
I do not want to do my work!
Have I got that clear to you?
I'll get it done some other day
Have I got that through?
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Old 04-25-2006, 11:16 AM
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Nice poem..........


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Old 04-25-2006, 01:04 PM
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Junk yard er shera poem
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Old 04-25-2006, 02:30 PM
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oh thanks guys, appreciate that.
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Old 04-25-2006, 05:17 PM
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mojer kisui pailam na
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Old 04-25-2006, 05:25 PM
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na paile ki ar kora! i did mention that its trash and so is in junk yard, otherwise would have been in the poetry section.
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Old 04-25-2006, 09:32 PM
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joss poem....


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Old 04-26-2006, 06:05 AM
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thank you thank you, totally appreciate that!
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Old 04-26-2006, 10:38 AM
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arg...
eita ki junk yard r jinish naki..eita to showcase thakar kotha..

iblish re mair e dite hobe...

eita chomotkar poem ta ke user poem e move korte hobe


nice poem man..



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Joss ekta poem Neo bhai... kintu eta pore to mone hoy apni ekta lazy pola


I've treated you the best i could, I realize that i dont need you...
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