i shall sleep no more...

Numb_with_Rage · #1 (**permalink**) 12-24-2006, 04:40 AM

macbeth specialist holley you would want to beat me up right now. but i cudnt find a better title. and i is in lower case intentionally. inspiration: e.e. cummings, he never followed rules. i type like that too.... i dunt emphasize my name or myself.
anyways... dunt think i'm a depressed freak cuz i'm not. i just wrote it at a harsh time.

check it out. wrote it in February 26, 2006.

Sleep dances on my eyelids,

yet I remain wide awake.

Fear the darkness enveloping me

that grows each day, with great speed.

A soft voice sings a lullaby, to help me repose

but the melody slashes, and opens up my wounds.

Memories sealed within, runs to escape

and chimes again with newborn shame.

In disarray, I quietly weep

and tears sprinkle, onto the bed sheets.

I drown my face into the pillows

and wish I could cease to exist

Grave sins have murdered my sleep,

I shall rest no more.

waiting here to meet my fate,

to be in deep slumber, forevermore.

soulful zombie · #2 (**permalink**) 12-24-2006, 02:12 PM

deep dude.......i jus hope u guys dont realy cut urselfs cos evry1 has a life thats worth living...all in all it is very evoking and meaningful....keep it up

lol ok i read the foreward i take my cut urself remark bak heheheh...cos then i wonder if a chik huse dp is like that (considerin she is a chik) y wud she want 2 cut herself if she looked like that? argh ud b flawin ur flawlessness...just my way of saying ur beautiful n so r your words..have a nice day

Numb_with_Rage · #3 (**permalink**) 12-25-2006, 02:56 AM

ay hai... lolz.

firstly, thx for the feedback

secondly, to avoid ure confusion. i dunt cut myself. if i'm hurt, i'll finally cry, but i wouldn't do stuff like that.

and as for the compliment.. thank u very much. u just made my day. now i can go to work with a good mood.
however, no ones perfect. but i'm glad u liked my words.
have a nice day forevermore.

tc.