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Old 12-03-2006, 06:46 AM
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this poems about two guys falling for a chick....the two guys are my white side and my black side...and the chick has an opinon about them...the chicks line is the ending chorus from "we ride" by rhianna.i only used it cos i dunno how 2 express womens feelings so good...anyways enjoy



Big city life trying 2 forget mine
The Pressure don't ease up no matter how hard I tried
This city life getting 2 my head drivin me insane
That’s where you came in
Filling in my blanks filling in my voids
Seeing you again now I can’t avoid
This is love

Looking at you I guess guys just wanna go in your pants
Reading up the dictionary for words they try advancing
On your being yeah like there’s any chance of it
What’s not better than just holding your hands?
I know I aint innocent but do I what I can
And I’d do anything just to be your man
Its not like as if I wanna knock your stride
It’s just that when I wake up I wanna see you by my side
And it’s not like I’m the kinda player just wants to get it
Girl however far I go with you I’ll never forget it…


When we ride
When we ride, we ride
It's till the day that we die
Oh boy, I wish that you could hold me
When I'm lonely when I need someone
To talk to, you were phoney
Just like everything you told me
When we ride
When we ride, we ride
It's till the day that we die
Boy, you forget about the promises
Made me, and now I let the memories
Fade away, but I rememeber what
You used to say
When we ride...
I remember what ya used to say
When we ride, we ride
It's till the day that we die..
We ride..when we ride, we ride
It's till the day that we die..
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Old 12-22-2006, 04:31 AM
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Who wrote this? whose work is this?


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ummm my its my work? i wrote the 1st 2 stanzas n i got the last bit off a song...y do u ask?
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lol umm the last bit is from rihannas work so techincally i rote 2 thirds of it heheheh....
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lol umm the last bit is from rihannas work so techincally i rote 2 thirds of it heheheh....
so it's a mixer of Rihannas 'we ride' and ur creativity...interesting!!


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umm is it gud?
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yaap it is good!

Can be a good lyrics for a song


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are joss hoiseto
onek boro poem oboshsho
dhorjo dhoira porsi..


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LOL thnk u 4 ur patience
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