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Old 03-05-2007, 01:55 AM
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Mogno Choitonno

khub dhire shesh koyti podokhep fele ami uthe elam

uthe elam bish tola dalan er chad e

charidik ta odbhut shun-shan neerob

shudhu matal haoar kanakani ...

ami shonikto bodh kori , tobe ki ora jane ,ami keno eshechi ?

vonitar kichu nei , ontoto jeebon er shesh prante dariye..

ha, ja vabchen tai ...

ami nijeke mukto korte cholechi

durmukh ra onek e bole eta naki atto hotta...

hotta ? ki hasshokor !! amar to mone hoy na....

nijeke ami boddo valobashi ..

nijer ai lombate mukh , patla chul , kali pora chokh kingba

dirgho din er klanti varakranto shorir -- shob kichu kei valobashi

ami shonka bodh kortam

prithibi r shob kichui amar valobashay vag boshate jacche...

nogod-narayon, shei tonni nari kingba kobita .... shobai jeno amar shotru

tara kere nicchilo amake , amar e kach theke

boddo oshohay bodh korchilam....

hothat e bujhte parlam .... mukti chai amar , chai nirobicchino oboshor

nijeke valobashar , nijer onabishkrito shotta ke khuje paoar...

tai onol mukhi potonger dike chute cholechi ami

mukti r shondhan e ....
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Old 03-05-2007, 02:10 AM
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gooood! darun hoise! mogno choitonne chondrahotor(?!) atto-onushondhan


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Old 03-06-2007, 04:46 PM
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Well, i think its good......but sometimes lousy.
Dont mind.
Thanks
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kobita hoy nai eita...ar jai hok....


ekta gopon kotha chilo bolbar bondhu shomoy hobe ki tomar?
ekbaar shune bhule jeyo barbar bhuleo kauke bolo na abar!
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Ato lomba lomba kobita likho keno ?? porte porte haray jai...hehe apart from jokes...ei kobita o shundor...keep writing!


...Just Waiting...
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eto idea pao koi kobita lekhar?
darun hoise! title ta sundor!



I see nothing in your eyes, and the more I see the less I like.
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valoi laglo
but eita kintu attohottai hoilo
goddo kobita lekhar agee amar mone hoi
chondoboddho poem diyei shobar shuru kora uchit


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Sorry, Ami ONAGOTO'r sathe akmot noi .....Its a poem
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@Khekshial : thx bro.

@ShopnoKothok:nah vai mind er ki ase . ami asole kobitar theem ta niye khub experiment korsi , theme ta dhore rakhar jonno kono kono time e kobitar lekha ta lousy hoye gese.

@OnagotoBidhata: As you think. Tobe aita thik ki hoise , bolle khushi hoitam.

@AnikaPutush: thenku penku very much.

@Angel_Eyes: Kam kaj na thaklei kebol matro boro kobita lekha jay.

@BaNNa: vai , thx. asole chondo milaya kobita lekha ta auomatic na hoile kora ta besh pain. mane amnei kobitar word selection and mode flow dhore rakha ta i pain. tar upor chondo add hoile.... amr dara possible na. ar mul karon jeita ...ami muloto kobita ja pori tar shob e goddo kobita...so lekhar time e naturally oitai chole ashe.
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bishoiti chomotkar...amar besh bhalo laglo. likhe jau amader diye jau....


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