Muktijoddha

[saad__]

16e Decemberer dine amra kori moha anondo,
Kintu amra ki jani,
Ei anondo ene diyechen kara?

Banglar potakar ronge,
Charidik cheye jae ei dine.
Amra ki bughi er mullo kototuku?

Amra gai gaan,
Jai sohid minar, sriti soudho,
Aro koto nam kora jaega.
Eshob kader jonno korchi amra?
Ki hoyechilo ei 16e December e?

Hanadar bahinir sathe lorai kore,
9 mash por bijoy peyechilam amra,
1971 shaler 16e Decembere.
Juddhe amader kono obodan nei,
Ache shudhu koti koti muktijoddhader,
R hazar hazar ma o bon der obodan.
Jara tader man shonman diye diyechen,
Nishthur shei hanadar bhahinider hate.

Amra hoeto tader jonno kichui dite parini,
Hoeto kokhono tader rin,
Shod korte parbo na amra.
Shudhu mone rakhbo tader k.

Mone rakhbo tader rokto jhoranor kotha,
Tader katano koshter diner kotha,
Tader desh premer kotha,
Tader protiti koshter din k amra shoron korbo.
Amader jiboner boye jawa proti dine.

Matha nichu hoye ashe tader shonman jananor shomoe,
Mone pore shudhu,
Shei muktijoddhader kotha,
Shei birongonader kotha.

Shonman janai, janabo tader,
Jara aj beche achen amader majhe,
Ar jara tader jibon chole gechen,
Amader bhalo rakhar jonno.


-- 1971 shaler lokkho lokkho muktijoddhader shonmane likha ekti kobita
(16 December 2005)






Ei poem ta 16th december e liksilam... ami jani na apnader kemon lagbe...... jehuto manush amar theke romance dekhte dekhte bored hoye jacche, ami ektu onno dhoroner jinish uposthapon korar chesta korchi...... plz shobai frankly apnader comments diben....
thank you

[Icy]

Frankly koi... 1st time vabsilam tumi vashon ditaso.. pore mone hoilo kobir to vashon deoar kotha na.. Pore last a tomar comments dekhe bujhlam aita kobita.. newayz good effort bro.. btw aitao kintu valobasha niyai likhso.. Desher jonno jara jibon dise tader valobaisha likhso.. Achha vai.. Maa ke niye kono kobita likhonai? likhle would u plz share?

[saad__]

na bro.. ma k niye to likhi nai

[saad__]

idea pai na tai

[saad__]

khaise..... kothin jhogra lege gese
sumit bhaia... shuvo re kichu koiyen na.... ami really frank comments chaisi... o dise.. so probz nai .. n thankz for ur comments too bhaia.

[BaNNa]

ya poemta porlam.
poem normally duirokom dekhi amra.
ektate chondo mil thake.
arektate thakena and etake bole goddechonde lekha.
but goddochondatateo kintu ekta chondo thake.
eta thik porlei bujha jai.
poem er subject ta chomotkar.
and saad er feelings taw josh.
but saad vaiya etake ashole kobita bola jaina.
ami ekjon poet ke dekhaisi eta.
jai hok tumi kobita tai 10 a '0' paileo tomar spiriter jonno 10 a 10 paitei paro

[saad__]

kobitae 10 e 0 ....... spirit diye ar ki hobe

[BaNNa]

lol
tumi dekhi mon kharap korso
mia ekbarei ki 10 pawa jabe?
likhte thako obiram
1 paba 2 paba 3 paba evabeto ekshomoi 10 pabai naki?
so chaliye jaw theke thekona
tumi je shahosh dekhaiso etato amra kew partesina
edik diye to tumi mela agiye shobar chaite
good luk

[saad__]

nahh mane ekbare 0 dila tai koilam...... 90 ta poem liksi ekhon porjonto... eto kom asha kori nai tai koilam ar ki

[Teddy]

Amio kobita omne bujhi na. Amar kacheo kobita mane chonder mil thakle. Naile mone hoi na. But saad er oneek kobita ami porsi. Or chonde mil na thakleo kotha guloy oneek jor thake aijonnoi ami shobshomoy purata pori.

Chalay ja saad akdin chonder mil o khuje pabi