My Beloved

The_ÐéviL · #1 (**permalink**) 08-30-2006, 11:06 AM

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SenSeTransp()rt · #2 (**permalink**) 08-30-2006, 11:18 AM

Nice finishing, Elysian flower term seemed a bit different.

all over a nice poem, but the structure is random.

The_ÐéviL · #3 (**permalink**) 08-30-2006, 12:06 PM

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Originally Posted by SenSeTransp()rt

Nice finishing, Elysian flower term seemed a bit different.

all over a nice poem, but the structure is random.

thnx bro.. n abut the structure all i can say dat is I just lyk experimenting..wen i've posted all my poemz u'll c ther is simple rhymers, elegiacs thn random structured poemz among them.. I've evn tried writin a trilogy.. altho i kno i'll nevr b able 2b a "poet".. i nevr tried being 1 or follow 1.. My poemz (or wutevr u mite want2 call em..lol) r just written xpressionz of thots n feelings i've been thru @ sum part of my lyf or still am.. i just wrote em for the fun of creatin em.. It feels gr8 2b able 2 xpress urself thru a poem..

Teddy · #4 (**permalink**) 09-01-2006, 06:43 AM

Nice poem bro

Sheikh Jalil · #5 (**permalink**) 09-01-2006, 02:34 PM

Nice poem! Nice Background!
Ami porechhi...

Lamia · #6 (**permalink**) 09-01-2006, 09:19 PM

Nice one bro..

Icy · #7 (**permalink**) 09-09-2006, 05:23 PM

Yep background ta shundor.. N obviously the poem is simply awesome..