My poetic mode!!!

[tok_jhal_mishti]

Onek din por goto kal rate hotat akta kobita.......naki onno kisu jani na!!
like felsi..................
dilam ekhane..................pls bore feel kore kacha anda marben na .......kacha anda gaye lagle marattook biroktikor gondho lage


"Onek din brishti choe ni amake
Panir fota gulo dhuye nae ni amar jontrona
shei kobe sheshbar shokh kore veja!
pani chitiye chitiye anondo kora
lukie brishtir panir shathe chokher pani ak kora
job jobe veja kapore sharadin ghora..

Mone hoy ak shotabdi par kore darie achi
Kamon ak jantrokotay bodle neya jibone..

Amar moner akashe megh jome ache besh kodin
jhorte chae brishti hoye kintu pare na
Onek anushthanikota ar shishthachar
shob kamon jano khachae bondi kora!

Aj jhom jhom kore brishti jhorlo
panir fota gulo amake chue vejalo
aj moner akasher brishti jhoranor shujog
brishtir ar osrur miloner din

brishti shesh hoyeche
dukhkho aktai
moner akasher megh gulo brishtir fota hoye jhore ni
mone mone tai brishti jhorai
Kintu megher gorjon ashe borshon hoy na...."

[habijabi]

Originally Posted by tok_jhal_mishti

pls bore feel kore kacha anda marben na .......kacha anda gaye lagle marattook biroktikor gondho lage

tometo mari ?

nah vaia, sundor hoise onek , koyekta kothin bangla shobdo english e porte giye jodio daat venge jacchilo pray . Keep writing ....

[tok_jhal_mishti]

Shopner akta gontobbo...........
rat theke shuru kore vorer kono akta shomoy
kokhono halka hashi ar kokhon gheme otha lolat

amar shopno gulo prokhor
shopno gulo jibon amar.

amar shopne gora akta prithibi ache
ai hoyto chaya poth er opare............
takie dekhle akashe take dakha jae
onek alok borsho ager chute asha ujjolotar protifolon

shopne amar jiboner shob kichu roy....
ami hat die chue dekhi..
kokhono hashi...........kokhono prochondo anonde chitkar kori
kokhono tar chule alto porosh nai

ghum venge gale milate bibroto hoi
konta shopno konta dushshopno!

amar prithibir ujjolotar protifolon oi dakha jae...
kintu sheto onek alok borsho ager.
amar shopno prithibir alo ki ajo ujjol!!

jana jae na.........jante pari na
ami chaya poth pari dite pari ni.....

[abinosshor]

I like the first one ,2nd one is also nice.But prothomta khub valo hoise..

[tok_jhal_mishti]

Kahinir Sheshtuku

Tar aj ghum ashche
klanto venge pora mon nie shey adhar kore...
majhe majhe ashe akta duto sritir choa
ashe thoter konae aktu muchki hashi
abar milae hashi bastobotae
jokhon shunnota grash kore take

jiboner shob pothei tar bijoy
onek ovimani shey
onek ohonkari
tar totporotar kache shobai ak bakke noto
jibone tar lokhkho chilo amon e bastobik

akdin ghum venge hothat pelo hahakar
jiboner shesh bikele chailo kurie nite kichu
ondhokar tar shujog dae ni
jiboner onek manei tar jana nei
kokhono mone mone vabe amon hoy kano!
ato bicholota kano!

majhe majhe chae ak doure palie jete
amon kothao jekhane kau chinbe na take
jekhane tar notun jonmo hobe
kintu moner konae jomano asha
ar shopner morichika take bedhe rakhe
tile tile khoye jae shey

shey jane akdin shob shesh hoye jabe
hoyto tar shesh diye ai kahinir shesh hobe

[anikaputush]

wow..bhaia sundor hoise kobitaguli
keep writing more!