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Old 01-22-2006, 12:04 PM
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eita onekdin agei likhsilam....puran golper forum a post o korsilam...ekhon abar korlam...ekta kobita bananor bertho cheshta arki....

NaKobita

Dite partamna tomake dami ekta muthophone,
Kintu partam kane kane valobashar golpo shonate.

Ghorate partamna tomake lal kingba shada garite,
Kintu partam rikshai ghontar por ghonta ghorate.

Niye jete partamna tomake bishal shomudro majhe,
Partam chader upor rimjhim brishtyte ojhore vejate.

Kine dite partamna jholmole rong beronger jharbati,
Kintu partam jhapsha-gholate opurbo josna dekhate.

Partamna tomake niye likhte ekta gaan othoba kobita,
Partam likhte khapchara chondohin eirokom 'nakobita'.

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Old 01-22-2006, 01:05 PM
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Vai valobasha niya shobai kobita likhtese.. Nice hoise.. Amio ekta likhi eykhaney..

Obak Valobasha

Bathroom er bodna futa..
Tao I love u..
Akashe ghono megh..
Tao I love u..
Cycle er chakai pum nai..
Tao I love u..
DVD te onek scratch..
Tao I love u..
Aij girls school suti..
Tao I love u..
Hard disc a bad sector porse..
Tao I love u..
Kudduser maiyar biya..
Tao I love u..

My 1st try.. Chondo chara kobita.. Amio pari ..
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Old 01-22-2006, 01:11 PM
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Azke sokale office ashar somoi lift e uitha deki..amy eka r keu nai..hortaler din....magar kedai jani ..amar age je utse oi hlaya maybe ektu Air Saira(fart) gese lift r modde...amar to gondhe jibon shesh

then ekta kobita mone prolo amar

Pade Padonti
pade Vaggobti
pad Nai jar
Jibon Britha tar

ki r kora nak muk chaipa doira uthlam upore...r mone mone promise korlam..
chance paile amyo ekbar same kam kormu...

Reveng Of a Fart..

I will let all of u know this revengs stories...

kwak kwak


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Old 01-22-2006, 01:40 PM
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hehe icy er poem a moja paisi....tumio paro vai valoi
ar Nneel vaiyer Pad bishoyok kobitata jotil....eita ki apnar likha?
naki procholito?

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Re: "Na-kobita" by BaNNa

... ore baba... Icy dekhi kothin ekta valobashar kobita likhe felse... khub e interesting .....

... Nneel r kotha r ki bolbo.. shob kisutei shoman revenge nite chaile je ki obostha darabe ke jane..... keu jodi lift e borjo podartho rekhe jeto tahole Nneel ki korto ??...
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banna vaia nice hoise kobitata
jeguli korba sobbi onnek sweet jeguli parba na oguli sob vua.
chaliye jao..........
Icy vaia tomar kobita ta to bes jotttiill
sob kisutei "i love u" :d
chalaya jao
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Re: "Na-kobita" by BaNNa

pad bishoyok kobita ta..thik PROCHOLITO na......onnek din agei cousin ra adda marte marte banano hoisilo.....
azke lift e pad r gondo payai mone poira gese....


icy r kotha hishabe

Lift e Boddho Jaigai
Manusher Pader gondho
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Old 01-22-2006, 06:19 PM
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umm....banna bhai....is it a kobita??? umm....nice....but try more hard.....kobitay bhab ta ektu beshi hoye gase....ojotha bhab....ektu koman...lolz....na bhalo hoise....khub bhalo hoise...amar moddheo kobi kobi bhab chole ashcche....amio kobita lekha shuru korbo....jus ekta kaure pai....cchak ta khaiya nei....lolz...


but amar icy bhaia er ta to fatafati...i luved tht....icy bhaia to always extra odinary....
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Wow Banna Joss kobita hoyeche....bhison Romantic ghotona....i neva knew u were into these stuff....
n Icy Bhaiya-r tao darun hoyeche...ektu different...
Shobar tai khubie nice...

Ai tomra shobai eto talented keno?
BD te thakle hoi to amio ektu hote partam

. whεn εvεrything's mαdε to bε brokεn ΐ just want u to know who ΐ am .
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Bah shobai dekhi kobi eikhane. Ki shundor shundor kobita lekhe. Banna vair ta joss hoise but Icy vai kobita lekhse 1st e bhabsilam shopno dekhtasi pore dekhi na asholei lekhse. Jaukgah valoi lekhse.


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