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Old 01-18-2006, 02:00 PM
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ar kichudin opekkha jodi korte

ar kichudin opekkha jodi korte
ful cheyechile baganke peye jete
khub shohojei parte chorui dhorte
folto foshol morche pora khete...

ar kichudin opekkha jodi korte
nodi cheyechile shomudro jete peye
dhewer badami ghorai tumi e chorte
tomai niyei chutto tara dheye...

ar kichudin opekkha jodi korte
dirghoshshash hoye jeto ek jhor
ar kichudin opekkha jodi korte
ontim-a hoto shobuj ei ontor...

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Old 01-18-2006, 05:25 PM
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wow nice poem bro.. eto kothin kore ami kobita likhte pari na.. keep up the gud work

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Old 01-18-2006, 05:58 PM
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goodm work.. keep it up
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Old 01-18-2006, 06:17 PM
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opss romantic poem o likhteso dekhi vai
valoito paro....
chaliye jaw vai
tomar dara shob e shomvob

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Old 01-19-2006, 12:00 AM
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valo lagilo kobita poria.......bravo aamiR vai!!!

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Old 01-20-2006, 01:20 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Bokor^ALI
ei part ta khub valo laglo.
Though, did not understand this part..

khub shohojei parte chorui dhorte
folto foshol morche pora khete...

ar kichudin opekkha jodi korte
nodi cheyechile shomudro jete peye
vai egulato shob e upoma....
apni jodi 2nd lineta bujhte paren tahole
"ar kichudin opekkha jodi korte
nodi cheyechile shomudro jete peye" etao bojhar kotha...ful cheye jevabe baganke pawa jai temni nodi cheye shagor pawar kotha bola hoise....
ar 'khub shohojei parte chorui dhorte' ebong 'folto foshol morche pora khete...' ei dui line er ortho different...mane ei dui liner modhdhe vaber mil nai....chorui jemon shohoje dhora jaina...furut kore ure jai...ekhane bola hoise shohojei dhorte parte orthat opekhkha korle impossible ke possible kora jeto...ar 'morche pora khet' mane onurbor jomi bojhano hoise....shekhaneo foshol folano shomvob ar ki...hehe...asha kori bujhaite parsi.....

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thnx vai...post ta koira valo korso....amaro bujhte shubidha hoilo arektu....ar kobita koi?

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aamir vai kotthin poem likhsen re vai. Aro kobita chai vai apnar kobita porte joss lage.

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Are saverus?..tumi eikhane?..lol....achhca jai hok....Amir...really nice kobita.....kibhabe banao?..ektu shikhaba??..
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Age kheyal korinai poem ta. But jotil hoise really!!! Great work!!

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