Nihoto.

[angelmorn]

Neelche Alor Abhai Utche Fuute
Mrido Shobdo sthobdo-dhar Charidike
Hawar begeh cholche chuute
Shomoy shudhu klanto sroteh.

Ekti Deho nistej moheh
pore roi Raastai bhirer majhe
shorol moner shopnogulo
Jai hariye ojana neere.

Ekeh Ekeh shob din kete jai
Jome uthe dhulo ei Kutire
Shomoy-er moddhe bujhe uthe Keo
Haralo bujhee sheh Ekla bheere.


I detest typing in Bangla nowadays with a keyboard where half the letters have been washed away - so couldnt bother using the Bijoy keyboard.

This is the ONLY poem I've managed to pen down in the last ONE year or so.= sad !

[abinosshor]

hey, nice poem, pore valo laglo. keep writing

[khekshial]

valo hoise, tobe rhyme korte chaile sudhu rhyme koro abar rhyme ar goddo kobitar o ekta fusion ache, eikhane etai dekhte pacchi, tobe aro elaborated hoile mone hoy oi vabta fute uthto, tobe valo hoise, aro lekho