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Old 05-03-2006, 10:43 AM
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Ek somoy amari lekha ekti Bangla kobitar English try korechhilam. Asole English oto bhalo pari na..Dear friends..pls comment on this...


I have no complain to say
I have no demand to pay
Who’s gone- has gone forever
Looses can return back me never
Still I’m finding the path alone
Standing at the corridor or Lon.

There’s no human can love me
There’s no smile even can I see
No star’s lightening above the sky
All things are beyond me so high
I can’t touch them this day at all
My heart's now falling to a great fall.


-Sheikh Jalil23.12.2003
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Old 05-03-2006, 01:20 PM
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gd... jalil bro tumi dekhi allrounder... eng poettry o likho...


U no I'm The Lord OF SaTanS... So Obey My OrdeR... Don Make ny Violence... B CarefuL !!!
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Old 05-03-2006, 04:10 PM
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gd... jalil bro tumi dekhi allrounder... eng poettry o likho...
I did just a try. Nothing at all!!
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Old 05-08-2006, 03:03 PM
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[I have no complain to say
I have no demand to pay
Who’s gone- has gone forever
Looses can return back me never
Still I’m finding the path alone
Standing at the corridor or Lon.
There’s no human can love me
There’s no smile even can I see
No star’s lightening above the sky
All things are beyond me so high
I can’t touch them this day at all
My heart's now falling to a great fall.
-Sheikh Jalil23.12.2003
Really very Touching poem....
/me is really touched by this one..

thnx man

Pothik.
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Old 05-08-2006, 03:14 PM
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well done....valo hoise...
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Pothik and Rodro,
Thanks for nice comments.
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Old 06-05-2006, 04:09 AM
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Not bad at all.. Great sharingz..

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Old 06-06-2006, 11:35 AM
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Thanks for reading this poem.
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Old 06-07-2006, 02:47 AM
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JOtil hoise mamu! hehe

nice work, liked the rhyming flow...

‹‹‹ Ĥαήġίŋġ βεŧωєєŋ ίή-Ьєŧωεεŋήєѕѕ ›››


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Old 06-11-2006, 01:42 PM
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JOtil hoise mamu! hehe
nice work, liked the rhyming flow...
Thank you so much.
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