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Old 09-03-2007, 08:25 PM
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e dekhi jotil habijabi kobita guru bhi ..chaliye jao guru bhi


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eta ki holo ?! eta ektu beshi bhalo hoye gelo na ?!

This seems to be very much different from your rhyming - chora type poems. which is nice.
You've managed to portray the whole situation from a completely different perspective very beautifully


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e dekhi jotil habijabi kobita guru ..chaliye jao guru D
ami voy e voy e asi kokhon tumi 'guru'r prothom rossho 'U' take ommit kore jao!

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eta ki holo ?! eta ektu beshi bhalo hoye gelo na ?!

This seems to be very much different from your rhyming - chora type poems. which is nice.
You've managed to portray the whole situation from a completely different perspective very beautifully
ajke bus e kore bashay ashar somoy theme ar line gulo mathay ghurpak khachilo, na lekha porjonto shanti pacchilam na . mon may be ektu torol chilo


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khub sundor hoise
situation er demand chilo ai poem ta

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awesome bro....

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alanapu, oshanto pothik ar batman - thanks for reading

writing rhyming poems is harder, they are fun, but doesnt carry intense emotion like the one here


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Beshi joss lagse theme ta. Shob theke valo lagse you just didn't blame a particular side like others. But to tell you the truth tor vetor theke eto kothin kotha ber hoise dekhe obak hoisi
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oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooffffffffffffffffffffffff oshadharon hoise........
eta shudhu bhalo lage nai.....boron prochondo bhalo lagse.....HABIJABI BRO apnake , i mean from my bottom of my heart...i giv u a THANKS.... onek onek onek bhalo lagse....
lyrics ta koto joss jani na...kin2 hottath kore online boshe erokom akta goddo kobita pore khubi joss lege gelo...

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