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Old 01-21-2007, 10:55 AM
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Ondhokar er maya-naar daat e kete,
hashi-mukh alor
bishad biday sheshe
eshe darai
shey shondikhon e

Na-din na-rat er ondho aami
dhonuk tan tan kalpurush ek,
Na dekhar dekhate korbo lokkho-ved

opekkha noy, kamona noy,
chinta pithe chinta gatha
shor-biddho oi krishno-kranti,
aaj amar tai sreshtho kormo-jog.
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Na-din na-rat er ondho aami
dhonuk tan tan kalpurush ek,
Na dekhar dekhate korbo lokkho-ved
ai para ta jhakkas hoise vai ......kintu akta kotha vai , aita ki typing mistake naki ai word tai use korsen.. "krishno-kranti" naki "krishno-kanti" ??
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......kintu akta kotha vai , aita ki typing mistake naki ai word tai use korsen.. "krishno-kranti" naki "krishno-kanti" ??
kranti , rekha, movement, abar shonjog-sthal o bujhano jay, like ekta jinish er seshe notun kichu suru, notun shomoy, krantikaal ...

eikahne krishno-kranti ta godhuli , vor-ratri, horizon er rupok kore alo-andhokar er milon ke alada kore distinguish korar try korsi, alo andhokar er majher najana oddhay takey janar cheshta ar ki [ahem... onek potor potor korlam lolzzz ]
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np

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obak hoilam tomar lekha deke... thik milate partesilam na
Nice man.


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Walk a few milez for a little far...Its a long road when u run it own..
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obak hoilam tomar lekha deke... thik milate partesilam na
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thank u bhai , ektu adhtu paglami ar ki hehe
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ari kow ki...mia
ei world e kono shusto manush nai
shobai pagoal..kom r besi r field khali alada


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vi apne to multi talent.... apnere dekhtesi r mugdho hoitesi...

serzly , jara kobita likhte pare , tader proti amar ekta onno dhoroner respect ase karon aita amon akta kaj chailei para jay na.....
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Great hoise bro.. Pore vallaglo..

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khub abstract hoise bhaiya...behind the scene er potobhumi na janle ey kobita bujha tought..emnite..as a poem..bhalo
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