Onteem Niyoti (Ultimate Destiny)

[oYn]

Onteem Niyoti

Meghachhano ei jibon

Badhonhara ghuri howe akashe

Chinimini khale nijer shathe

Upohash kore, shantonar shafollo k ||

Nijer srishti jhor e

Srity howe bheshe jai matal srote

Akre dhore, beche thakar adommo obhilash

Krittim moher ei jogoter shathae aposh kore ||

Pare na bhulte, oparer hatchani

Kal er shesh prante dariye
Khuje na pai shei Onteem Niyoti ||

[Numb_with_Rage]

kothin hoysey...
portekta line joss laghsey amar kasey.

fav line:
"Nijer srishti jhor e
Srity howe bheshe jai matal srote."

karon j.. amra nijey tau sh*t banai r ki.. khamakha ono rey doshaya ki labh?



tc

[oYn]

random thoughts……………….no sense

Do we know our destiny? Is it us who decides it? What is our ultimate destiny?

Life is like free clouds in the sky. If you try to suppress the feelings it pours down as rain…playing games with us, wants something now then regret it the next moment……..Mocking at our success, which even we don’t believe in.

Then comes a point, where we had to make a major decision regarding our goal…….fighting with emotions, logic (e.g. money / passion), suppressing either one, We pour down with the storm we create (we are responsible for our decisions/actions), the current tries to grasp us, but our human instinct to-live stops it by compromising with the society (the choice we made). We stand in one side of the river. Still we can’t forget the other side. In the end we stand at point where we don’t find the destiny we were looking for or confused if this is the one.

[Numb_with_Rage]

random thoughts er modhey ekta joshila bhab asey..
everythings a mistery..
there is always grey... it just defines all of us in general... we dunt think completely in terms of black, or white... there is always grey.

we can be utterly sure abt ourselves.... and in one blow everything can shatter to pieces.

confusion tau ektu thakbey.. restlessness is part of life i guess..
always aspiring for something... but u dunno if u r gona get it...
wen u get it, u might decide that u didnt want it, and if u dunt get it, u might just sob thinking why cudnt u get it? just like anything else u ever wanted...

supressing feelings niye ki r bolbo.... like ure line abt compromising with the society.

one needs to supress a few things for the best of others, and sure why not.... aito din chup korey ashtasi... arektu chup thakley ki r hobey amar..

an other way to look at that.... you want urself to be rebelious, but really you are just conforming to society.

meh....

amio jani na ki type korlum..

tc

[naheen]

awesome... loved every bit of it

[Icy]

Khubi nice hoise .. Keep writing bro..

[oYn]

Originally Posted by Numb_with_Rage

kothin hoysey...
portekta line joss laghsey amar kasey.

apny shob kisui barai bolen

Originally Posted by naheen

awesome... loved every bit of it

Thanks for reading nd glad u liked it ......

Originally Posted by Icy

Khubi nice hoise .. Keep writing bro..

Thanks bro, life er 1st poem, mone hoi last poem o........

[Numb_with_Rage]

ami barai boli na....
shottho kotha boli....

ar akhono bolbo.... you're a creative person, but u dunt get to exercise that side much.

ey jono kobita porey moha khushi hoysi.. lolzzzz

asholey o joss hoysey.

tc.

[ChickenKing]

nice...its nice

[CutE_CupiD]

nice poem...