Oporajita'r ChiTThi-Potro: 1

[Pristine]

uff..ey cheleta amake abar kadalo...picchi....thambi? etotukun ekta mnusher eto gobhir khoto keno ?

[Anti-idiot]

is it some mother's words to her son who raised her little lad despite bearing all the whirlwinds the blew on her innocence?

nice and splendid... i wish i could think like you do.

[}|Serial_Killer|{]

Hm... ami kobita r boddha na. Tobe ami art and culture er ekta rule e bisshash kori , ja amar kache valo lage sheitai valo. Critic value ke ami boro kore dekhi na.

shei aspect e bolte pari, ke ki bolbe jani na, kintu kobita ta amar oshadharon laglo.

kobita ta prothom poray thik bujhini , kintu 2-3 bar porar por onek beshi vivid laglo kobita ta.oi line guli r inner feelings oshadharon , oi mangsho pinder aboronhinota kingba rod chosma r kotha ...

tobe ami first e kobita pore jeita vabsilam , sheita hocche , aita kono kumari ma ba dehopojibi r nijer onagoto shontan ke uddessho kore lekha. pore obossho reply pore vul bujhte parsi.


nice work. Hope to see more poems from you.

[khekshial]

onagoto bidhata , ek kothay opurbo, emotion er perfect representation, amar kase shilpoman e oshadhoron! amar khubiiii valo laglo, shiggiri 2nd part ta dau. rep added.

[OnagotoBidhata]

2nd part prolly dewa hoye gese....na hole shighroi dichhi!

[Bristir Chhonde]

Apnar deya 2nd part pore prothom part khuje ber korlam....Oshadharon likhte paren apni....likhte thakun asha kori r o porar sujog pabo amra...onek dhonnobad ei dhoroner shundor kobita upohar deyar jonne...

[OnagotoBidhata]

thans for all your wonderful feedback.

i'v posted some of my non-oporajita writings too.
please read and give your comments.alwayz look forward to readers' feedback.

thank you all once again.

[PraNTiK]

BAPRE!!!

khubbi voyaboho!!!

darun likha