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Old 08-30-2006, 05:43 PM
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the lost havens looked down
relieved at the downfall
priced memories shattered around her feet
none left alive ever again...

in tune with her surroundings
the time flew past
relinquishing the last few drops..

gone ahead ...gone away
the light gave way...
dropping out the silence..
murdering all sorrow.
all the darkness that ever managed to crawl into her.

the moon shone out her way.
the stars brightened out.
the petals graced her...
the everglistening scent of a new freedom lived on around.

and there she was...free at last.


poem ta mone hoi ektu incomplete lagbeh...but couldnt work on it no-more.
bhaab...shobi holo bhaab!


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Old 08-30-2006, 06:39 PM
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nah amar kase complete-e mone hochche

nice hoise asholei

thnx for sharing

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Old 08-31-2006, 12:50 AM
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Valo hoise honestly.. Kivabe lekhe manush ami bujhina.. Amio chai..

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Old 09-01-2006, 07:04 AM
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shundor hoise

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Old 09-03-2006, 03:17 PM
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Read it 5 times then understood what you meant!

It was really nice I tell ya! who says its incomplete? Its very much complete,

rather you can say, its too short, you could've streched it some more. . .

anyways, nicely done!

‹‹‹ Ĥαήġίŋġ βεŧωєєŋ ίή-Ьєŧωεεŋήєѕѕ ›››


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Old 09-03-2006, 03:23 PM
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im back......

incomplete as in ur soul? cos im gettin the feeling u want sumthin that u like very much....then again i could be wrong
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Old 09-09-2006, 05:23 PM
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Nice poem apu ..
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Old 09-09-2006, 06:21 PM
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nice one....

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luvd the conclusion.. nice work

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