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Old 09-21-2006, 12:19 AM
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If you cant read 4m within the image Plz visit http://spaces.msn.com/members/devilzzone/

Many have made a trade of delusions and false miracles, deceiving the stupid multitude..

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Old 09-21-2006, 12:32 AM
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Hmm.. Not that bad.. Kinda random thoughts..
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Old 09-23-2006, 01:02 AM
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Oneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek ageyyyyyyy porsilam...ajke abar porlam...

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Pain...

It drops in ur life... like mid-summer’s rain!

Pain...

A feeling inside... like bleeding from ur vein.

Pain...

It grabs a hold on u tight... n blurs ur brain!

Pain...

It shows u no lenience... n thrashes u like cane.


Pain...

It makes u cry out! It turns u insane!
I specially Love these lines...

Good Writing Deva

...Just Waiting...
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Old 09-23-2006, 02:01 AM
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Nice rhyming. . . but too strict rhyming does harm the flow . . . and here it happened

anyways, ur thoughts are too cool! keep it up!

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Old 09-23-2006, 02:22 AM
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cool poem bro

nice sharing..

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Old 09-23-2006, 04:21 AM
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BRAVO DEVIL

keep goin' on
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Thnk u very much all for ur replies..

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Nice rhyming. . . but too strict rhyming does harm the flow . . . and here it happened

anyways, ur thoughts are too cool! keep it up!
thnx bro.. i kno therz a lil too much rhymin but wen i wrote it i was really feelin "pain" n to keep on rhymin felt very soothin..

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wow wow jus wow....too kooolllll

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wat is pain? it is when numby slaps devu. lolzzzzz
onek agey porechilam... brings back many memories.
tc dosto

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