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Old 01-11-2007, 04:19 AM
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Pata vejao

pata vejao, pata vejao
patar rong nil hole
ichchhemoton khata vejao||

asha vejao asha vejao
ashar rong chhai hole
nirjonotar vasha vejao||

vijuk dukkho vijuk shukh
vijuk onek gopon mukh
je vejabe vijuk sheo
hoito mana korbe kew
korle koruk ki tate-
vijbo ebong purbo ajke
brishti namer chitate||

ami sorry...onekdin por golpe ashte parlam...baba hojj a jawai amake ekhn Dokane boshte hoi...even amader driver eid er por na ashai amake drivergiri-o korte hoi ajkei poemta likhei post kore fellam...

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Old 01-11-2007, 04:41 AM
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Welcome back Aamir bhaiya! Dokane boshei to kobita likhe felte hobe Ar drivergiri korte korte mone mone kobita auraba!

Kobitar title + kobita ta jomfa ! ar chondo guli sundor hoise. Mon bhijiye porlam!


I see nothing in your eyes, and the more I see the less I like.
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Old 01-11-2007, 10:23 AM
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khub bhalo lagse pore, onek thoughtful , darun hoise
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Old 01-11-2007, 10:39 AM
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aww... missed ur poem bhaia...welcome back..


mon asholei bhije gelo kobita ta pore...awesome writing bhaia

...Just Waiting...
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Old 01-11-2007, 02:25 PM
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wow....

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Old 01-11-2007, 03:12 PM
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BhalO laaGlo BhaI..KeeP iT uP


You see the smile that's on my mouth..Its hiding the words that dont come out
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Old 01-11-2007, 06:28 PM
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meladin por dekhlam aamir mia ke
dokandar dekhi valoi poem likhtese
hehe kobi aamir ekhn dokandar aamir hoye gelo
vabtei obak lage
valllaglo vallaglo poemta vallaglo

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Great job
Wow
i am astonished
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last er ager line ta kisutei millo na, no offence, shobar kase bhalo lagse, but amar kase lage nai, kamon arnab er lyrics er tarchira koyekta para laglo

/shaggy goes back and start reading some other stuffs by aamiR!

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Old 01-11-2007, 08:05 PM
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joss hoise bhaia...asholei khubi bhalo laglo pore

Gaaner Ami Tumi Hariye Jabo

I Never Knew That Love Would Be So Beautiful To Me
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