'Pata vejao' by aamiR

[JoLkoNNa]

Wow, u r soo talented....Nice work..

[aamiR]

thnx shobaike
special thnks to $#@ggY bro for ur negative comment ja ami chai..

Originally Posted by ~$#@ggY~

last er ager line ta kisutei millo na, no offence, shobar kase bhalo lagse, but amar kase lage nai, kamon arnab er lyrics er tarchira koyekta para laglo

no offence poem valo nao lagte pare...but last er ager line tar ki millona ektu ki clear korben? chhondo millona or vabgoto meaning millona? amar mone hoi chhonder bepare kisu bolar nai..coz eita grammar maintain korei likha..kobitati Shorobritter 4/4 chhonde likha...ar hmm i've no idea abt arnab's lyric..ok ami vabgoto orther bepare kisu boli..orthat ami jeita bujhate chaisi...physically Brishti amaderke vejai..but je borshakal ba brishtir shomoita..ei shomoi amar vetore kichhu nostalgia kaj kore...ja amake vetore vetore purai...so ami bolte cheyechhi "Purbo ebong vijbo ajke, Brishti namer chitate"....thnku

[~$#@ggY~]

kobita bhalo na lagleo apnar definition beshi bhalo lages. dude you've earned my respect. rep points chara r kisui dite parlam na!

[OnagotoBidhata]

bhalo laglo bro.
keep them coming!

[nisargo]

kobitata valo likhsen...surutato chomotkar
kintu sesher dike jeno kothaae ki ektar ovab bodh hosse.....khei hariye felesilen ki? jodio seshe porjoto valo vabeiutre gesen
overall ekta smartly written kobita...


ar apnar sesher line dutar je bornona porlam ta pore aro valo laglo...