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Old 09-23-2006, 11:20 AM
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PART-2: P.o.m.h.-!!

PART-3: http://www.golpo.net/forum/f50/p-m-h-2860/


If you cant read 4m within the image Plz visit http://spaces.msn.com/members/devilzzone/

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Brother . . . Your poem is full of feelings and nice metaphores, some are contradictory, some are fantastic !

But, I strongly suggest you to post the trilogy in three parts, three different threads by giving the readers some times to read one by one.

Now, very few will have the patience to read it full.

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Brother . . . Your poem is full of feelings and nice metaphores, some are contradictory, some are fantastic !

But, I strongly suggest you to post the trilogy in three parts, three different threads by giving the readers some times to read one by one.

Now, very few will have the patience to read it full.

Thnx 4 ur advice.. I've posted em separately..

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Old 09-23-2006, 05:25 PM
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hehe devil bro khepse dekhi...

time-e ditasenna...

anywayz another nice poem...thnx for sharin

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hey devil...anotha nice one...superb!!

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hehe devil bro khepse dekhi...

time-e ditasenna...

anywayz another nice poem...thnx for sharin
lolzz.. thnx BaNNa bhai..

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hey devil...anotha nice one...superb!!
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Poem ta nice.. But background choose ta valo na.. Porte ektu prob hoi..
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poem ta shundor

Gaaner Ami Tumi Hariye Jabo

I Never Knew That Love Would Be So Beautiful To Me
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joss hoysey devu. as usual. tc

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