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Old 05-20-2006, 02:30 AM
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Okay guys.....Ami first time Poem likhtesi....so ami temon bhalo na....This poem is dedicated to my BF.......His name is Ehsan........ok..here it is....


Rat Din bhabi shudhu tomar kotha
Ar bhabi tomake jibone koto diyechi betha

Tumi amar karone koto dhukhkho shoyecho
Tobuo tumi amay maaf kore diyecho

Jibone chinta korte pari ni, pabo tomar moton ekta chele
Kintu ami tomay ki diyechi? tumi ki pele?

Amar kache kichu nei, bhalobasha chara,
Kintu meyeder shathe tanki marle, khobor ase, Khara!!!!

Ami kokhono kono kobita likhini
Tobu likhechi class e, kono lecture shunini

Tomar piche koto meye, jemon Preity and Bithy
But no one can love u honey, More than me!

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Old 05-20-2006, 02:37 AM
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nice kobita......keep it up....
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Old 05-20-2006, 12:24 PM
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Really great.. thanks for sharing...

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dhuru . . valo na

same jinish over n over again . . plus -- too common .. everyone talks about the same thing !

jai hok . . first poem so kharap bolbona . .chesta chaliye jao..


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Old 05-20-2006, 01:25 PM
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not bad, pretty alright for a first timer!!

its about stealing stones and breaking bones

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Old 05-20-2006, 06:42 PM
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Lolzzzzzzz....

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First Poem! Nice start, nice wrok. Rhyming is good. First six lines are poetic, next six are straight; but the ending is so good. I believe, you can write more poems. Welcome to the poem's world.
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apu onek cute hoise....

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Gr8 nice funnyyy poem prova i like it josss


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gd work..... But eki kotha bar bar ashay ujjolota ektu rash peyecche... no prob... keep it up...


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