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Old 01-24-2006, 04:26 PM
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ei kobitata ami ekta shahitto shovai path korsilam...golper shobar jonno bojha kothin hobe kina bujhtesina....tarporo onek probashi bangali oneker bangla bujhte ektu koshto hoi...mane shahitter kichu bangla word...tai niche koyekta translate kore dilam....ar banglai likhe post korlam...



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Old 01-24-2006, 04:40 PM
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Vai... Onek jotil kobitata.. Ami khub alpoi bujhsi.. Main thing is amar ekta daat poira gese aita porte jaiya.. Akhon amare biya korbo keda!! .. Jaukga.. Amar comments kichuina.. Saad__, BaNNa, Bokor^ALI, KissofDEATH, b3d_of_raz0rs... Enara valo bolley bujhba khub valo kobita.. But vasha ta khub tough...
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bhaijan.....kobita ektu kom bujhi....tar moddhe ato beshi shohoj language use korsen...j bojha amar saddher baire...onek try kore....1st para ta bujhlam....
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amaro dat vangar jogar prai.onek kothin kothin sobdo .but kobita ta nice hoise
bises kore itispitis er para ta amer khubbi valo lagse
chaliye jao aamir vaia but ektu sohoj sohoj sobdo likho.......

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ami abar kothin kobita likhte pari na....... tao mone hocche bhalo hoise........ onek tough words use korsen....


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aamiR vai MashAllah vai joss kobita. Apnar kobitai chonder kotthin mil thake jeita amar vala lage. Chondo chara kobita poira moja pai na temon akta. Mane bujhte jodio aktu koshto hoise but apnar translation poira Allahr Rohomote oneekta buijha gesi. Nice effort man!!! Keep it up


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... onek din por ekta mojar kobita porlam...
... kintu ekhane shobai emon shob comments likheche.. jeno keu kono din bangla valo vabe pore nai... ekhane kono word e kothin na.. borong shohoj..

...aamiR .. tomar vashar babohar darun... khub e valo...
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nice one Aamir!!!...good one!! i like iT


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ya i agree with jhora pata apu......nice poem, jotil poem likhso vai.....ar asholeito ekhane jotil word kothaishobito onek shoja...khubi anondo paisi poira...



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lol
maximum e dekhi kobita bujhtesena...
taile ar luv ki holo....
etoi daat vanga work ki use korsi? i'm confused...
amar kobita gular modhdhe etato khub shoja shei jonnoi disi
onogulato er theke onek kothin...
bujhtesina.... :s


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