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Old 07-30-2006, 03:05 PM
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a poem without a name and without a feeling...

this so callled poem is from hearin 'im in luv (wit a stripper) by T Pain.....i hope its better than my utha prototype of this 'poem' so try n enjoy it...btw i hav no personal feeling for this poem....

Growing up in a place they’ve never heard of…
I never managed to find u eye 2 eye…
I see you on my street walkin by..
With wat I think must be the luckiest guy…


lookin down where im not supposed to
Hips swinging, legs for miles
The clothes ure wearin, the latest style…
Cant say wat im feelin rite now…
Dunno where to make u notice me and how…


The mind plays tricks on any real fool
Guess I gotta stand up and play it cool
Dirt off my shoulder cudnt be any hevier
Gunna keep it real jus 4 ur sake…
Gunna hide the fact that im a fake..


Flashbacks of me n u (girl) roll on by
Indescribable, like magic it’s tragic, almost romantic
When im takin off with u (girl)….to my far away place
Then it starts to happen…it all takes place
Now I wanna b takin off the shirts….lemme see ur face
Baby girl start workin it…don’t worry nobodys gunna get hurt
and baby girl u make me say.....i luv u n u make my day.....
n i luv makin luv 2 u....lemme share wat i cn b with u
now i wanna be kissin ur lips n say gudnite....
and i be hopin wat i sed was rite...

ummm.....all u girls out there normally i dont rite this kinda thing im jus experimenting also im in a creative slump n thinkin abt stop ritin poetry...
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Old 07-30-2006, 03:24 PM
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wow...itz really nice

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Old 07-30-2006, 03:34 PM
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Noice man.... keep it up

I've treated you the best i could, I realize that i dont need you...
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Old 07-30-2006, 05:10 PM
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Ahhh. . . .!

the last verse was cooooooooool!

I enjoyed the feel. . . its like riding on it!

cool 1!

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Old 07-30-2006, 05:22 PM
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nice poem soulful zombie
thnx for sharing..

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Old 07-30-2006, 08:29 PM
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Valo hoise.. Keep it up!

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Old 07-31-2006, 01:24 AM
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nice poem!! thanks for sharing

Look in my face...Step in my soul
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im just not gonna say nethin...u read my comment on ur blog... no more...
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Old 07-31-2006, 03:11 PM
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A nice one bro .. Like it..
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