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Old 01-06-2007, 08:18 AM
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If I held a precious flower
Right here in my hand
Crashed it’s very life force
You may understand

The heart break you’ve caused
Feels like life’s end
I’m cried out and wounded
No love left to lend

If one day I should recover
Or yet see you again
Just pass me by
Or my anger will rage and reign

You’ve no notion of love
You’re a user, abuser
Taking endless hearts,
Crippling all you’re a looser

Love is not simply sex
Or merely intimate nights
All losers like you
Should be given last rights.
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Old 01-06-2007, 09:42 AM
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way to go Rahul, valo hoise

but apnar ei obosth ken, ke ei abuser? namta kon golpo er polapan nia mair dia ashi
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Old 01-06-2007, 01:04 PM
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but apnar ei obosth ken, ke ei abuser? namta kon golpo er polapan nia mair dia ashi
hahahaha thikito
quick namta koiya felan

nah apnar poem ta valoi hoise
nice rhyming
thnx for sharing
keep it up


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Old 01-06-2007, 01:32 PM
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not a bad... gd 1 yaar



U no I'm The Lord OF SaTanS... So Obey My OrdeR... Don Make ny Violence... B CarefuL !!!
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Old 01-06-2007, 01:43 PM
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chorata...joosh hoyeche...u used the word "LoOSEr" ..no wonder [haha!]


Since Da Day U Were Born..I Knew That I Cud Neva Take Another Ez Breath...WId U Xisting In Diz World
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Old 01-07-2007, 06:31 AM
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Thank u 2 evry1 for likin da poem.
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Old 01-08-2007, 01:19 PM
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oi oi eita poira amaro ganjam korte mon chaitese, oi khekkush, banna shob chol piatay ahi
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Old 01-09-2007, 02:00 PM
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wow thats angry man....but its a mad poem
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Old 01-10-2007, 08:26 PM
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"shud be given last rights?" -what last rights bro? they shud be hanged to feel the pangs of pain...anyways, ekebare jhere likhechen...good
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