Rain

SenSeTransp()rt · #1 (**permalink**) 09-23-2006, 02:15 AM

This poem is dedicated to 'S'. The first line is taken from his MSN PM. Yes, Shuvo = Icy, this one's for you bro!

Rain

The more it rains, the more I miss you
Touch of the drops, soaking my heart through
The more the sky cries, I call you by
Conveying the message, nurtured in my
Heart was arid, the dew falls in
Moistened be mine, your image so clean

The wind rushes now, to my window
The dance of your hair, I remember so
That smile of your face, never can I forget
Swayed away, lest I don’t regret
Rain is our passion, rain is our friend
It may stop pouring outside, but in me, it will never end

EROS · #2 (**permalink**) 09-23-2006, 10:28 AM

nice...very nice

BaNNa · #3 (**permalink**) 09-23-2006, 10:43 AM

wow vai jaan juraise amar

eto shundor chhondomil

really cool

shuvo lucky...taake niye etto nice poem!!!

CutE_CupiD · #4 (**permalink**) 09-23-2006, 11:08 AM

joss joss bhaia...i luv rain...shuvo bhaia onek lucky bhaia...atto joss poem likhse tomake niye

}|Serial_Killer|{ · #5 (**permalink**) 09-23-2006, 11:15 AM

tosh ...thats a great poem indeed..... cool stuff and keep it up.

But would plz clear me one thing ...

to whom you dedicated the poem ? S = Shuvo [Icy] or anyone else !!

The_ÐéviL · #6 (**permalink**) 09-23-2006, 11:42 AM

really nice 1.. especially the verses of the second half.. nice conclusion too

darkcrunk · #7 (**permalink**) 09-23-2006, 03:26 PM

jar jonno lekha kobita
shey jane na ekhono
brishti pore..

khekz :P ..

nice one priyo

Icy · #8 (**permalink**) 09-23-2006, 06:44 PM

Thanx a lot .. Khubi shundor likhso.. Sorry for being late.. Jodio poem ta ami shobar agey porsi yesterday.. Neway whole credit goes to SenSeTransp()rt.. Just first line was mine.. Though it was my random thought.. I didn't plan to write a poem.. But SenSeTransp()rt make it possible.. A big hug for u bro ..