remember my name

[soulful zombie]

hi everyone...jus 2 let u kno im still around d i rote this so u wont 4get im still around


a dark summer day
anticipitations the wind
blowing in from the west
surroundings...im its guest
and a moonflow of rage pulsating through my chest

the rain rips down
the sound of a mobs roar
hear it roar, hear it roar, HEAR IT ROAR
pourin down the very pit of your soul
dont worry son, rage is not cold
seperating you from me from the holds
of sanity....a concept so old...

you will not remember a thing when it takes over
the rain burning your minds desire
remember nothing but the memory of one
remember my name........


o n hey dus any1 here do bebo?

[SenSeTransp()rt]

Almost like a song. . . nice meaning!

my the middle conversation kinda lines could've been better with proper punctuations. . .

overall, I liked it!