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Old 06-27-2007, 03:56 AM
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Tukro jogoter aloe
Jokhon adhare khuji
Tomar jonno duto shur,
Ojana kono deyal ghore
Atke ache nirobe
Amar bivhokto chetona.

Matal rong jokhon shondae naame,
Harate paro ek rupok prithibite.

Jekhane kosto gulo shudhu amar,
Jekhane firee jete pari abar,
Boddho shob janala khule die,
Meshabo alor shathe adhar.

Boloni Kanna gulo obocheton,
Bolini oosru gulor abogahon,
Nirobe aka joto adahar chobi,
Gore amar "Rupok prithibi"

Ekhane ekhono onno manusher
maje ache oshanto sriti amar;
Tobu muche felechi mone
Tumi bole jakichu chilo amae.

Jara boya chole shomoshore
Chokhe niye amar otit, tader
Nome ache ajo kono Oshonlognota...

Jekhane kosto gulo shudhu amar,
Jekhane firee jete pari abar,
Boddho shob janala khule die,
Meshabo alor shathe adhar.

Boloni Kanna gulo obocheton,
Bolini oosru gulor abogahon,
Nirobe aka joto adahar chobi,
Gore amar "Rupok prithibi"

Jenechi kothae tomar porajoy,
Dekho porahoto joto artonad,
Matal rong jokhon shondae naame,
Harate paro ek rupok prithibite...




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Old 06-27-2007, 03:28 PM
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Hoice .......U r An Arttcell Fan



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Old 06-27-2007, 04:48 PM
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Hoice .......U r An Arttcell Fan
lolzzzz...kinda i'm . But i i dowanna follow them..


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heeh aretcell artcell gondho !!
nice hoise !
gaan banai felen


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oooh, nice poem.


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heeh aretcell artcell gondho !!
nice hoise !
gaan banai felen
vhaiya pochailen naki???

hehehe... shobi ase.. polapain nai.. jogar kore den. du dine banie felbo..

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oooh, nice poem.
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nice poem bhaiya......ami to er moddhe halka-patla shur e felai disi lyn gulore....
but sheitao artcell typ hoye gese.......


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nice poem bhaiya......ami to er moddhe halka-patla shur e felai disi lyn gulore....
but sheitao artcell typ hoye gese.......

hmm.. oky.. word selection er golmal.. rupok word ta na asle vahlo hoto taina.. asole ami try korechilar rupkothar prithibi. But it was a lill more odd. so i had to use. Oky.. i promise next one wont be artcell or any other type.. Ki shur korla ta janio.. karon amio ektu adtu korsi.. ar jodi interested how tobe .. word gulo change kore poro lyric ta send korte pari.. keep in touch..

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Zabir bhaiaaa, r jai hok Artcell er gondho paua jak ba na jak...Marattok Likhecho. I like Artcell Shei jonno ekhon theke ami tomar FAN!

Ekta kotha Kauke Role Model Na korle Apni bhul Shodraben ki kore? So Just be like wat's u are!


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Old 06-30-2007, 03:39 AM
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thanks every one.. tomra na bolle hoeto ajke eta kortam na.. post ta ke change kore.. puro lyric ta pathalam.. hope u will like it more...


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