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06-27-2007, 03:56 AM
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Zabir
is feeling blue
Creative Star
Gender: | | Last Online: 08-30-2008 12:24 AM Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Dhaka | | Ruopk Prithibi.. (full version ) Tukro jogoter aloe
Jokhon adhare khuji
Tomar jonno duto shur,
Ojana kono deyal ghore
Atke ache nirobe
Amar bivhokto chetona.
Matal rong jokhon shondae naame,
Harate paro ek rupok prithibite.
Jekhane kosto gulo shudhu amar,
Jekhane firee jete pari abar,
Boddho shob janala khule die,
Meshabo alor shathe adhar.
Boloni Kanna gulo obocheton,
Bolini oosru gulor abogahon,
Nirobe aka joto adahar chobi,
Gore amar "Rupok prithibi"
Ekhane ekhono onno manusher
maje ache oshanto sriti amar;
Tobu muche felechi mone
Tumi bole jakichu chilo amae.
Jara boya chole shomoshore
Chokhe niye amar otit, tader
Nome ache ajo kono Oshonlognota...
Jekhane kosto gulo shudhu amar,
Jekhane firee jete pari abar,
Boddho shob janala khule die,
Meshabo alor shathe adhar.
Boloni Kanna gulo obocheton,
Bolini oosru gulor abogahon,
Nirobe aka joto adahar chobi,
Gore amar "Rupok prithibi"
Jenechi kothae tomar porajoy,
Dekho porahoto joto artonad,
Matal rong jokhon shondae naame,
Harate paro ek rupok prithibite...
Last edited by Zabir; 06-30-2007 at 03:54 AM.
Reason: The full lyrics is here..
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06-27-2007, 03:28 PM
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DarKsaInt
is bcK 2 floating lyf .....
Prince of Darkness
Gender: | | Last Online: 08-29-2008 02:27 AM Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Inside the DarK Eyes | | Hoice .......U r An Arttcell Fan ı ωαłκ αłøи€ αłł тħ€ ωαч øƒ đαяκи€šš | 
06-27-2007, 04:48 PM
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Zabir
is feeling blue
Creative Star
Gender: | | Last Online: 08-30-2008 12:24 AM Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Dhaka | | lolzzzz...kinda i'm  . But i i dowanna follow them..  | 
06-27-2007, 05:46 PM
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BaNNa
is trying to do something!
Tired.... Moderator
Gender: | | Last Online: 08-29-2008 11:46 PM Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: RajshaHi | | heeh aretcell artcell gondho !!
nice hoise !
gaan banai felen  | 
06-27-2007, 06:29 PM
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shmegel
is hating mechanics
Creative Star
Gender: | | Last Online: 08-29-2008 06:19 PM Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: ::iN_mY_gRaVe:: | | oooh, nice poem. | 
06-29-2007, 08:42 AM
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Zabir
is feeling blue
Creative Star
Gender: | | Last Online: 08-30-2008 12:24 AM Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Dhaka | | Quote:
Originally Posted by BaNNa heeh aretcell artcell gondho !!
nice hoise !
gaan banai felen  | vhaiya pochailen naki??? 
hehehe...  shobi ase.. polapain nai.. jogar kore den. du dine banie felbo.. Quote:
Originally Posted by shmegel oooh, nice poem.  | Thanks.. | 
06-29-2007, 04:41 PM
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Odbhut Chele
has no status.
G. DemiGod
Gender: | | Last Online: 10-22-2007 01:17 AM Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: amar bashai | | nice poem bhaiya......ami to er moddhe halka-patla shur e felai disi lyn gulore....
but sheitao artcell typ hoye gese....... | 
06-30-2007, 03:28 AM
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Zabir
is feeling blue
Creative Star
Gender: | | Last Online: 08-30-2008 12:24 AM Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Dhaka | | Quote:
Originally Posted by Odbhut Chele nice poem bhaiya......ami to er moddhe halka-patla shur e felai disi lyn gulore....
but sheitao artcell typ hoye gese....... |
hmm.. oky.. word selection er golmal.. rupok word ta na asle vahlo hoto taina.. asole ami try korechilar rupkothar prithibi. But it was a lill more odd. so i had to use. Oky.. i promise next one wont be artcell or any other type.. Ki shur korla ta janio.. karon amio ektu adtu korsi.. ar jodi interested how tobe  .. word gulo change kore poro lyric ta send korte pari.. keep in touch..
and thanks.. | 
06-30-2007, 03:30 AM
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Bristir Chhonde
is Worried!!! Hurricane Alert!!!
G. Immortal
Gender: | | Last Online: 08-28-2008 02:01 AM Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Meghla Megher Deshe, Bristi Hoye Pori Seshe :) | | Zabir bhaiaaa, r jai hok Artcell er gondho paua jak ba na jak...Marattok Likhecho. I like Artcell Shei jonno ekhon theke ami tomar FAN!
Ekta kotha Kauke Role Model Na korle Apni bhul Shodraben ki kore? So Just be like wat's u are! | 
06-30-2007, 03:39 AM
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Zabir
is feeling blue
Creative Star
Gender: | | Last Online: 08-30-2008 12:24 AM Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Dhaka | | thanks every one.. tomra na bolle hoeto ajke eta kortam na.. post ta ke change kore.. puro lyric ta pathalam.. hope u will like it more... | | Thread Tools | | | | Display Modes | Linear Mode |
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