Shopno

saad__ · #1 (**permalink**) 02-23-2006, 12:32 AM

Jokhon mone thake onek dukkho,
Tokhon mone pore tomar kotha.
Jokhon mon khushite mete uthe,
Tokhon mone pore tomar kotha.

Tumi bolo, ami shudhu tomar bondhu.
Tumi bolo, amader majhe nei kono bhalobasha.
Tumi bolo amra hobo na kokhono chiro sathi.
Tome shob seshe giye ki, robe kichu amader majhe?

Janina ki hobe,
Shudhu etotukui jani,
Ami bhalobashi tomake.
Shudhu bashi ta bolbo na,
Beshe jabo sharati jibon.

Hoeto amader majhe,
Bondhutto chara ar kichui hobe na.
R jodio kichu hoe tobe,
Shob kichu khoda ar tomar hate.

Shopno hoeto shob shomoe shotti hoe na.
Kintu tai bole ami ki,
Dekhbona ar tomake pabar shopno?

21 February 2006

Sheikh Jalil · #2 (**permalink**) 02-23-2006, 02:24 AM

Swopno dekhar odhikar sobaire acche, she swopno purno hok ba nok.
Sundor kobita. Thx saad_ for sharing.

Prova · #3 (**permalink**) 02-23-2006, 05:02 AM

NICE nice very nice...

CutE_CupiD · #4 (**permalink**) 02-23-2006, 11:04 AM

saad__ bhai agen a nice one....keep going....

IrOnMaIdeN · #5 (**permalink**) 02-23-2006, 11:29 AM

ula ula sad vai...mone hocce kaure niye ai kobita ta liksen ...hehe....kobita ta khub i simple ... and simplicity is the Beauty . .. manus bole karo kobita dekle tar character somporke idea pawa jai ... and ur character is just perfect i think. tnx

saad__ · #6 (**permalink**) 02-23-2006, 10:01 PM

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Originally Posted by IrOnMaIdeN

ula ula sad vai...mone hocce kaure niye ai kobita ta liksen ...hehe....kobita ta khub i simple ... and simplicity is the Beauty . .. manus bole karo kobita dekle tar character somporke idea pawa jai ... and ur character is just perfect i think. tnx

lolzzzz..... world er kono manush perfect hote pare na.... yahh eita ekjon er jonnoi liksi...... just problem hoilo... ami tare like kori... ar she amake ekhono friend er chokhe dekhe.... mone kore amader moddhe kichu hobe na... ashole poem er shob xpress korsi...... ar ami jotil kichu likhte pari na.... amar bangla er word stock kom... amar shob poem i simple

n thankz others

Icy · #7 (**permalink**) 02-23-2006, 10:16 PM

Dear saad-en-dronath.. Again a nicer one.. But 21st feb a valobashar kobita likhso? hehe bangla vasha niya ekta kobita likho plz.. 21st ai likha uchit chilo.. Ar eita likha uchit chilo 14th a..

saad__ · #8 (**permalink**) 02-23-2006, 10:40 PM

hmmm onekei bosilo..... 21st e matri bhasha niye likhte, but kichu likha hoe nai... ar ek yr wait korte hobe..... oidin mon khub kharap chilo, tai ekta romantic poem liksi.... r 22nd e doita xam chilo... so jotil kichu likhte iccha kortesilo na..... mone ja asche, tai liksi ar ki

Teddy · #9 (**permalink**) 02-24-2006, 09:40 PM

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Originally Posted by Icy

Dear saad-en-dronath.. Again a nicer one.. But 21st feb a valobashar kobita likhso? hehe bangla vasha niya ekta kobita likho plz.. 21st ai likha uchit chilo.. Ar eita likha uchit chilo 14th a..

Valobasha ki ar date mane bhai? Leikha jokhon felse oi kobita akhon to ar kichui korar nai.

saad__ dosto oi meyeke ki kobita ta disili porte ?

saad__ · #10 (**permalink**) 02-24-2006, 09:48 PM

yahh disilam... she pochondo korse.... ar aro joss jinish ki janish.... ajke she amar sathe emon jhogra korse........ j shob khotom kore disi....... ore niye ar poem likum na....... shudhu ore niya na..... ar kaure niyai likhum na..... shomoy noshto....