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Old 10-17-2007, 09:08 PM
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Silent Pain


Engulfed in the silent pain
Away, lost in solitariness
Cries a child of dreamless mind
Waiting to be sapped by the nature!


Detached, from the love of friends,
Lost in the path, where heart never mends,
He walks down with his one legged curse
Where every step leads him backwards,
Evaluating, how long he lasts!


Suffering from moment of ignorance,
He fails to restrain his unworthy emotions,
What is it that makes him so different?
Like every other person, he has a heart,
That plays no merciless cast!


His strength overwhelmed under the bounds
To which he finds no significant grounds
He is strong, just weakened by the society
A little love and care can lead him towards prosperity!


He holds a blank fate,
Life, worthless of what it beholds,
He questions himself, Am I worthy of living??
Answers his silent pain, "No! What is left in a life when there are only tears to flow!"


Unchained from all pain,
Now he rests.........


one of my fav poems. I dnt knw how i ended up writing this!

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Old 10-28-2007, 10:30 PM
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jossssss!!! .............emotional poem


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Mashalla bro.
nice job.
Its really good.
u should write more of those.

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lol tor romantic poems koi galo

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facebook er GF er shathay tola bhetki marka pic ekta post koira dimu naki?
it will work as Antacid against Stomach pain ooops Silent pain

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thnx dark_saint, Sonarchele and mibshahid.. really apprecaite your comments!

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facebook er GF er shathay tola bhetki marka pic ekta post koira dimu naki?
it will work as Antacid against Stomach pain ooops Silent pain:P
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lol tor romantic poems koi galo:P
tui thakte ar kisher romantic poem...

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He holds a blank fate,
Life, worthless of what it beholds,
He questions himself, Am I worthy of living??
Answers his silent pain, "No! What is left in a life when there are only tears to flow!"


Unchained from all pain,
Now he rests.........


Awesome stuff man

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Really man, i am already a fan of yours..Keep writing.

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Awesome stuff man
thnx Gemini..thts very sweet of u to say tht!

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Really man, i am already a fan of yours..Keep writing.
thnx man..i am really flattered!

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