The Song

Enigma · #1 (**permalink**) 11-07-2007, 11:46 PM

The Song

Solemnly walking by the shore
With a guitar as my mate
I sing a song for the dark sky,
A song that creeps away every fate!

I cry and I shed,
The tears of bloody red!
The ocean looks at me,
And laughs, striking the mighty strong waves,
As if life's a joke, just a 30 mins play!

I lost, yes I did,
Every step, reflecting my shattered lid,
And digging myself a bottomless pit,
Where there is none to save,
But only a hope, if my soul remains unleashed!

Yet, I sing, the song of death,
With my feelings buried inside, unexplained....

Enigma · #2 (**permalink**) 11-11-2007, 11:42 AM

no response lol

anikaputush · #3 (**permalink**) 11-11-2007, 11:47 AM

sorry i just saw this thread right now

how do u rhyme so well? dyam. u r good!
Like the other poem i read before, this one is nice too

"I cry and I shed,
The tears of bloody red!
The ocean looks at me,
And laughs, striking the mighty strong waves,
As if life's a joke, just a 30 mins play!"

quite a unique way to put these feelings in words!
wanna read more poems frm u!