Sritir Patae Patae

[saad__]

Amar sritir mosto boro pustoker ekansho tumi.
Protiti patae patae ache tomar chobi,
Ache aro shoto shoto chotto chotto jinish.

Ek khane ache tomar hashir kotha,
Onno khane ache tomar dukkher kotha,
Ar er majhe lukiye ache amader bhalobasha.

Jokhon shob kichu bondho kore takai khola akasher dike,
Mone hoe jeno, akasher doi pranter taragulo,
Tomae jeno khuje beracche.

Jokhon tumi eshe darao amar pashe,
Tara guli jeno kache chole ashe,
Tomar bhalobashar choya pete.

Ashole to tumi fire ashoini amader kache.
Sritir jor jeno tomake niye eseche,
Amar kache, ei prokritir kache.

Amar sritir patae patae acho tumi,
Ar robe shob shomoyer jonno.
Robe chiro omor hoye, amar ei buker moddhe.




This poem was liked by many.... letz see how many of u ppl like it... i am excluding friend_ i know he will hate it

[friend_]

saad__
this poem was liked by many.... letz see how many of u ppl like it... i am excluding friend_ i know he will hate it

Yaaap!!!

Love is everywhere!!

And saad please if you can ....write one poem for me without the words like....

''Tumi''
''Valobasha''
''Valobashi''
''Prem''

[saad__]

yahh dosto there is...... read the poem 'Fun'.. itz without the words u mentioned..

if u wish, u can check that one out..

[saad__]

well my poems are taken from others thoughts..... i don have ny1 to write these for...

[CutE_CupiD]

now i m sure tumi cheka khaiso!!!! 100%.....

[Teddy]

Originally Posted by Saba

now i m sure tumi cheka khaiso!!!! 100%.....

Kirre saad__ dosto kichu kosh na ken? Shobai to shobkichu buijha falailo re

[saad__]

Originally Posted by Saba

now i m sure tumi cheka khaiso!!!! 100%.....

saba....... ami karo jonno kokhono poem likhi na.... ami age hoeto bolsi ei kotha... ei poem gula manush er chinta dhara er kotha chinta kore liksi..... well amar last 4ta poem ekjoner jonno likha..... coz amar mone hoe... hoeto ami ekhon true love e achi

[Teddy]

Originally Posted by saad__

saba....... ami karo jonno kokhono poem likhi na.... ami age hoeto bolsi ei kotha... ei poem gula manush er chinta dhara er kotha chinta kore liksi..... well amar last 4ta poem ekjoner jonno likha..... coz amar mone hoe... hoeto ami ekhon true love e achi

Hmm dosto shobi bujhlam. Achcha dosto aktu chinta koira dekh hoito last 4 tar ager 4 tao kaure niya lekhsili

[Sheikh Jalil]

saad_ apni khub bhalo lekhen; sundor kore asole moner kothatii-to bolte cheyechhen. Thx for sharing.

[saad__]

Originally Posted by b3d_0f_raz0rs

Hmm dosto shobi bujhlam. Achcha dosto aktu chinta koira dekh hoito last 4 tar ager 4 tao kaure niya lekhsili

dosto er age oneker jonno liksi eita tick, but ei first ejoner jonno 4ta liksi.... but amar kopal tai kharap j she amar hobe na .... lyf ta onek kothin re.....