Standing tall

[Severus]

You live in a town

where all truths are fictions
where all faces are masked
where all sounds are noises
where all hands are dirty

Are you standing tall ?

Like a swan in a pond without mud on the feather
Like a towering tree against the stormy weather
Like a rusty and dirty speedsign still glittering '60'
Like an old dog barking to say he is still on duty.

Is your head still held high ?

[mritticool]

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[Sheikh Jalil]

You have a real talent. Nice poem. I liked it. Thx a lot.

[Severus]

thank you thank you

[krYpTik]

makes me feel like "stranger in the city"
good work Severus.. amazing keep tat up !

[jhora`pata]

... so impresive... and ur way of thinking s out standing...
... thank u fr sharing...

... like to read more....

[SenSeTransp()rt]

Nicely done bro!
liked the paragraphing...

[BaNNa]

realy beshi josh
valo laglo vai
apnar thinking way ta diff...valo lage
thnx for this

[ami_tiptip_bristi]

very very very gooooood

[Severus]

thanks people for reading... nothing is more inspiring than your comments