Tomaay....

[Gemini]

Ko' deen aage eta likhhechilam amar blog Thoughts of a Chaotic Mind e kebol matro ekta entry hishabe. Odin likhte boshe ar kichu mathay elo na, elo ei line gulo. Oneke pore pochhondo korechhe jeta kina chilo ashaotit.
Tai ekhane dilam. Please feel free to comment/criticize

Tomaae boro chhute ichhe kore.
Tomar haath sporsho kore
dekhte ichhe kore
tumi amaae onubhob koro ki na
Oboshsho tumi je dhora chhowar baire ekdom

Tobuo tomaae onek kachher mone hoy
jodiyo ashole ta nou
Amar ostitto shomporke kono
dharonai nei tomar

Tomakeo ami thik chini na
Chardeek tomar kemon jeno....
dhoaate ek shopneel pracheer diye ghera
Khub kothin shey pracheer bhenge
o paare dhoka
Nijeke prokash koro na keno?

Bhoi pao bujhi?
Ami to tomaae bhalobashi
Tai bole abar
pagol bhabcho na to?
Ami to janiy tumi
rokto mangsher keu nou
Tate ki?

Ami tobuo tomaae bhalobashi
Tumi jibonto keu nou
Tumi dhoaate
Tai kohono dukkho debe na.......

[Zabir]

speechless..

[tanna]

woah *applause*

(it's crude advice but I like poems that rhyme)

[DarKsaInt]

Oshadhaaron ...............emotional romantic poem ...........wants more

[Gemini]

Originally Posted by tanna

woah *applause*

(it's crude advice but I like poems that rhyme)

Hehe yea me too but when it comes to writing, I aint very good at it. So I stick to the other styles.

Thanx everyone!

Dark Saint, I don't really write but when I will, I'll post for sure

[abinosshor]

Sundor hoyeche.

[Gemini]

Thanx

[fat_dark_ugly_boy]

concept ta bhalo lagse... build up tao bhalo hoise...

[Chocolate]

... khub shundor likhecho apu...onek bhalo laglo pore.. u shud some more poems..

[Gemini]

exams shesh hok then I'll try