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Old 04-23-2007, 06:38 PM
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Amar chokher drishtikone tomar neiko bhul
Tomay pawa amar chawa
Amar mone asha jawa
Hridoy kon e chotto asha
Tomar jonno bhalobasha
Shey ashate gaa bhashiye
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Osrute Du chokh bhijiye
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Shudhui Shukno ful..............

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Old 04-23-2007, 09:09 PM
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A Song title?!?!

hmmm...nice poem but for some reason eta ke kobita mone hochche na

...Just Waiting...
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Old 04-24-2007, 01:46 PM
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Than whot it it????? well i actually wrote it as my our song...but welll just sharin....hey....u know i m really dissapointed wiv u guyz....its kinda u dont actually response at nooobies & it hurts a lot....coz 15 views and only 1 reply????whotever i think this wasn't tht good to get response....

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Old 04-24-2007, 02:00 PM
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Nice!!!

ami o angel_eyes er shathe ekmot je eita poem mone hoche na.
but lyrics ta amar khub pochondo hoice.
eita amar kase gaan mone hoche

again , nice ......and keep it up.


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kay....i m not at poem kayy....but the song is totally mine...not neone elses....so atleast give me tht credit...plzzzzz

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Old 04-24-2007, 04:32 PM
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kotha shundor...


U no I'm The Lord OF SaTanS... So Obey My OrdeR... Don Make ny Violence... B CarefuL !!!
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Old 04-26-2007, 06:04 PM
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thx to me e jonno j noroker shordarer kach eeta shundor mone hoyeche....and Iblish bro thx for readin...

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nice hoise
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Old 04-27-2007, 12:36 PM
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Killer u killed me....eta nis hoise...hmmm

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amar vallagse eita
onek touchy
amar kase poem mone hoise
keep it up

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