Tomay Paowa - Golpo Community Forum
Golpo Community Forum   
Forum Rules Donate Arcade Radio and TV Downloads RSS Feeds

Go Back   Golpo Community Forum > Smack Down > Users Showcase > Stories & Poems
Reload this Page Tomay Paowa
Register Blogs FAQ Members List Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Stories & Poems Your Own Stories & Poems Should Be Posted Here.

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
  #1 (permalink)  
Old 04-18-2008, 02:00 AM
_MuHaI_'s Avatar
_MuHaI_ has no status.
StyLe GuRu
Gender: Male
My System
  
Posts: 7,338
Threads: 37
Last Online: 08-29-2008 04:38 PM
Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: DhaKa!!
Send a message via MSN to _MuHaI_ Send a message via Yahoo to _MuHaI_
Default Tomay Paowa

Shei brishti bheja dupure
peyechi ami tomake
Moner shob dukhkho bhule
Cheyechi shudhu tomake

Shopno amr ghireche tomay
Goreche ek rongin prithibi
Muche phele shob koshter chaya
Shukhe rangano nemechi brishti

bhabini kokhono shukh khuje pabo ami
adhare ghera mon alokito korle tumi
Tomar chokher ogochore bhashchi ami
Amar moner majhe robe shudhu tumi....



err dont complain if its bad... ami poem lekhte parina =S.. this was just a random attempt =S

I've treated you the best i could, I realize that i dont need you...
Reply With Quote
  #2 (permalink)  
Old 04-18-2008, 06:40 AM
chokher-polok's Avatar
chokher-polok has no status.
G. Hobbit
Gender: Female 		 
Posts: 116
Threads: 1
Last Online: 07-16-2008 08:24 AM
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: ittu beshi durey
Default

its beautifully written
.. poem ta kar jonno ?

bhage re maan khahi...aage re maan chala..jaane kidhaar..jaanu na..
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 04-18-2008, 08:32 AM
oYn's Avatar
oYn oYn is offline
oYn has no status.
r e B e L
Moderator
Gender: Male
My System
  
Posts: 3,020
Threads: 67
Last Online: 09-07-2008 10:29 AM
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: .
Default

good one Muhai, post more
Reply With Quote
Sponsored Links
  #4 (permalink)  
Old 04-18-2008, 12:55 PM
feOna's Avatar
feOna has no status.
G. Prodigy
Gender: Female 		 
Posts: 884
Threads: 16
Last Online: 07-19-2008 09:36 PM
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: india
Default

brishti bheja dine peacho?
dodela dine ki korecho?


→W@†Ćħ M€←
Reply With Quote
  #5 (permalink)  
Old 04-18-2008, 01:27 PM
delilah's Avatar
delilah has no status.
G. Immortal
Gender: Female
My System
  
Posts: 2,853
Threads: 52
Last Online: 08-18-2008 06:00 PM
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Silk City
Blog Entries: 6
Send a message via AIM to delilah
Default

random effect diye e chaliye jao...its getting there

Reply With Quote
  #6 (permalink)  
Old 04-18-2008, 03:10 PM
DarKsaInt's Avatar
DarKsaInt has no status.
Prince of Darkness
Gender: Male
My System
  
Posts: 9,621
Threads: 65
Last Online: 09-07-2008 12:11 AM
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Inside the DarK Eyes
Send a message via AIM to DarKsaInt Send a message via MSN to DarKsaInt Send a message via Yahoo to DarKsaInt
Default

Wow! ......khubbi shundor hoice poemta .............Bhaloi to !


ı ωαłκ αłøи€ αłł тħ€ ωαч øƒ đαяκи€šš
Reply With Quote
Reply

Sponsored Links

« A picture Story by Sara (depression_within) | Akti Osompurno Golpo »
Thread Tools
Display Modes
Linear Mode Linear Mode

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On
Forum Jump

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Mone pore tomay... alana Gossip 11 04-09-2007 12:18 PM



All times are GMT +7. The time now is 12:29 PM.

Copyright ©2003 - 2008, Golpo Community. All Rights Reserved.
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.7.3
Copyright ©2000 - 2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
SEO by vBSEO 3.2.0
Islamicvdos.com | Your Ads Here
Secured Loan | Bad Credit Loan | Mortgage Loans | Internet Advertising | Debt Consolidation

Contact Us - Golpo - Sitemap - Privacy Statement - Top