TomisraProdip

[Pristine]

Ratrir belabhumi,chondraloker lukochuri
Bashbagane dip jale nirobe purnima
Ghasher prante jhore pore shishir
Jeno shupto bedonar chitrokolpo-nishi’r
Potro pollober mormordhoni ,shurer jhonkar
Nrittoroto gulmolota-unmottotar adhar
Oshanto shomudrer gombhir gorjon, jenoba ojana akkhep
Shitol jolrshi dey tobo proshantir prolep
Porbotshringe jomat-badha shuvro aboron
Ontornihito goroler ghurnon ,ta praneri spondon

Nilabh gogone dhobol meghbalika
Tar bokro hashi ekadoshir shoshi
Prokritir porajoy..durboddho rohosshomoyota...

[Masoom]

Wow, excellent poem.

I wish i could write like that.. will try and post one soon but don't ecpect it to be good or any similar to good, otherwise everyone will be dissapointed.

[Anti-idiot]

advanced writing skills.... u have a good future in it mia.... waiting for pristine shomogro

[Pristine]

Originally Posted by Masoom

Wow, excellent poem.

I wish i could write like that.. will try and post one soon but don't ecpect it to be good or any similar to good, otherwise everyone will be dissapointed.

m honored...thanks for such a nice appreciation

[darkcrunk]

Oh my ... great poem indeed. I like the way you have worked on the flow .. a little close to conventional ones, but still a bit different. good job.

[Pristine]

Originally Posted by Anti-idiot

advanced writing skills.... u have a good future in it mia.... waiting for pristine shomogro

arif bhai..ur comment means a lot...eto tao bhalo likhinai...haha...pristine shomggro asiteche..

[BaNNa]

tomar shobdo vandar besh rich to
pore valoi lagse amar
kemon ekta purono purono vaab ase
but title niye lil bit confused ami..bujhinai

[Severus]

shongskrito vasha r poem :s ... voy paisi ! ..

btw... joss hoise

[disher]

kothin kobita!!!

[Pristine]

Originally Posted by darkcrunk

Oh my ... great poem indeed. I like the way you have worked on the flow .. a little close to conventional ones, but still a bit different. good job.

thanks, it just a random thought of mine...if u read it again and again...u will find some hidden meaning in it..thanks for ur comments