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Old 11-09-2007, 06:47 PM
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no one reads ma poem lol..still posting another poem from my collection...hope u like it...


Waiting



In the grave silence of nature
Sat there a girl, waiting
Beholding every movement of clouds
With bleary gesture!


Her eyes kept showering the pain,
With hope, standing rigid,
Still in her every vein!


She woke up everyday before the dawn,
And kept on waiting,
Even after the nightfall!


She had no one to live for
But for her love,
Whom she once promised,
"I will be waiting
Till u return
And Kiss my heart"


Days passed, years passed...


Now he returned from a victorious war,
With lust and passion striking his musty dust!
But it was too late,
For now she slept
Without any fate!


He cried like a wild,


With intense pain, breaking his strong shield!
Now his life has no meaning,
He lived with building rage with in him!


He looked at her grave,
He was no more brave,
He closed his eyes
And felt her beside
Took her by his arms,
And kissed her soft palms!


And she slept there,
Still waiting...


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Old 11-09-2007, 08:29 PM
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Oshadhaaron Enigma ......keep writting



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Old 11-09-2007, 11:25 PM
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i read, and its nice



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Old 11-09-2007, 11:42 PM
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Jotil kobita
manush ki sundor likhe..ami to parina



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thnx ppl..

this is not one of my best but i like its theme!


@anikaputush--->ami likhte pari na...it mite sound weird but i can never recite any of my written poem..i dnt even remember one line!!!!when i write, i am someone else! i dnt like reading poems nor writing them lol...

so dnt worry babe. everyone can write. just give it a shot..


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Old 11-10-2007, 03:37 AM
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You are a real poet bro.


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enigma joss!!! aro lekho!!
ar mone rakhba "cogito ergo sum" hehe


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everyone writes sad things..


if i could hold on through the tears and the laughter..
would it be beautiful?or just a beautiful disaster..?
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Quote:
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everyone writes sad things..
sobai ato dukkhi keno.


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@aurora--> lol..let me explain u why...

when ppl are happy, they are too bz enjoying their moment! when ppl are angry, they are too bz controlling their anger. But when ppl are sad, they cry and express their feelings through words, which ends up being a poem! i write poem when i am sad.


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